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#40630 03/21/07 02:49 PM
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I was smiling by the end of this one. It is so different than the stuff I've been reading lately. I didn't find it choppy. For me, it hit Lois and Clark right on. The banter was classic and well done. I love where you brought it.
I'm going to read it again. 10/10. I wish I could stay with them. I like the road they are on.


I've converted to lurk-ism... hopefully only temporary.
#40631 03/21/07 09:49 PM
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I might write a sequel Super Roo if I can figure out exactly how it will work. Let me think about it. At the moment I have to write a sequel to my nfanfic.

The Little Tornado.


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#40632 11/09/07 11:16 PM
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Just stumbled across it. Just one complaint (ok two, that are actually the same)

- just 8k, 8k!! sad
- where is the sequel

You really have a great way of vocalizing their thoughts (see nibbling)

Michael


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#40633 11/12/07 09:09 PM
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Darth_Michael,

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just 8k, 8k!!
I am assuming you mean the size of the file itself - sorry, I write in Notepad and use word wrap and sometimes I think I have written a lot when I actually haven't. I want it to go on forever too!

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where is the sequel
Sequel? I think you mean sequels? Because I see this as part of a sequence of stories set within the continuity of the series (well upto a point) where we see how this challenge continues. But first I have to a) watch the series again and find a good moment and be inspired (I was inspired by the look on Clark's face for this one) and b) I have to finish the sequel to my other N fic story "Nibbling At../The Feeling Is Mutual"

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You really have a great way of vocalizing their thoughts (see nibbling)
Thank you for that but I wouldn't know how to write any other way. blush What and how people think changes their world around them....

"see nibbling" I assume is referring to my other story? If so blush you're making me all hot and bothered with these compliments. Thank you.

And by all means keep bugging and reminding me to write these stories/sequels - real life interferes way too often so I need to be nagged.

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#40634 11/13/07 08:04 AM
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I am assuming you mean the size of the file itself
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Sequel? I think you mean sequels?
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find a good moment and be inspired (I was inspired by the look on Clark's face for this one)
/hopes for many good inspiring moments

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b) I have to finish the sequel to my other N fic story "Nibbling At../The Feeling Is Mutual"
A very important task as well.

Which reminds me of getting over there and leave FDK at nibbling.

See you on the dark side of LnC-fic

Michael


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#40635 11/13/07 10:00 PM
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Darth_Michael:

I love that you like that I am up to date on my l33t speak and computer lingo and that if I mention the possibility of sequels you want a party.

I am a geek - I apologize profoundly.

"good moment" - I meant a good moment in the action of the series where it is obvious that either a) CK is responding to the challenge or b) Lois is thinking about it. Hence why I will have to watch it carefully.

I need help shutting my mouth.

Here's my current list of writing projects:
- For L&C:
- Sequel to The Feeling Is Mutual
- possible sequels to Gauntlet
- My solo response to my Scavenger Hunt Challenge
- My cowritten story with Zoar3 for the same Scavenger Hunt Challenge

- For other stuff:
- an article every week for my newspaper
- my bloody novel
- my short story anthology

Every time I open my mouth - another damn idea pops out. And then I am being held to it by all you nutters. *runs and hides under the blanket*

*sigh*

Cheers, The Little Tornado.


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#40636 11/16/07 09:47 PM
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Hey TLT
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"good moment" - I meant a good moment in the action of the series where it is obvious that either a) CK is responding to the challenge or b) Lois is thinking about it. Hence why I will have to watch it carefully.
Of course you meant a good moment on the show. I wouldn't have thought you were talking about anything else. Now, of course, since you thought about clarifying help shutting my mouth.</font><hr /></blockquote><font size="2" face="Verdana, Helvetica, sans-serif">Don't worry, just pour it into the next story.

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Here's my current list of writing projects:
- For L&C:
- Sequel to The Feeling Is Mutual
- possible sequels to Gauntlet
- My solo response to my Scavenger Hunt Challenge
- My cowritten story with Zoar3 for the same Scavenger Hunt Challenge
[Emperor-voice]good, good.[/[Emperor-voice]

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Every time I open my mouth - another damn idea pops out. And then I am being held to it by all you nutters.
Well, what can I say. You brought this onto yourself? wildguy to the weather station to look for signs of tornadoes forming*

Cheers, Michael


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#40637 11/18/07 07:46 PM
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Don't worry, just pour it into the next story.
You are a mean man... mean ;-)


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*Sends [Wildguy] to the weather station to look for signs of tornadoes forming*
A tornado with a degree in Geography knows how to evade weather satellites. :-P

Cheers, The Little Tornado.


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