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Comments: An Extraordinary Man II (20/?) #4031 07/03/03 08:52 AM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 484 The near side of the back of b... Krissie OP Beat Reporter
OP Krissie Beat Reporter Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 484 The near side of the back of b...	Guest starring Inspector Henderson... Chris

Re: Comments: An Extraordinary Man II (20/?) #4032 07/03/03 09:19 AM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 3,644 North Carolina, USA ChiefPam Pulitzer
ChiefPam Pulitzer Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 3,644 North Carolina, USA	Heh, I like your Henderson. Great use of details, too, like the broken filing cabinet drawer digging into CJ's leg... I've been thinking I need to work more on that kind of detail in my own writing Can't wait to see what the stakeout discovers -- and I wonder where CJ will be while Lois is under policy supervision? PJ "You told me you weren't like other men," she said, shaking her head at him when the storm of laughter had passed. He grinned at her - a goofy, Clark Kent kind of a grin. "I have a gift for understatement." "You can say that again," she told him. "I have a...." "Oh, shut up." --Stardust, Caroline K

Re: Comments: An Extraordinary Man II (20/?) #4033 07/03/03 10:31 AM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 3,846 Puerto Rico mariadferdez. Pulitzer
mariadferdez. Pulitzer Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 3,846 Puerto Rico	Hi, Great part. Maria D. Ferdez. --- Don't like Luthor, unfinished, untitled and crossover story, and people that promises and don't deliver. I'm getting choosy with age. MAF

Re: Comments: An Extraordinary Man II (20/?) #4034 07/03/03 10:47 AM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 1,047 NJ Supes1fan Top Banana
Supes1fan Top Banana Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 1,047 NJ	Ahh Henderson is on the case..Hooray! I like the way he wants to cringe everytime they reveal more info! LOL..cool part! ~Liz Lois: Can I go? Clark: No. Lois: Oh come on, Clark, why do we go through this? We both know I’m going to go. Clark: Then why do you ask? Lois: I’m trying to be nice.

Re: Comments: An Extraordinary Man II (20/?) #4035 07/03/03 12:20 PM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 767 usa merry Features Writer
merry Features Writer Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 767 usa	Chris great part I like your Henderson also more soon please merry

Re: Comments: An Extraordinary Man II (20/?) #4036 07/03/03 05:39 PM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 1,999 The edge of civilization, Minn... T Tank Merriwether
Tank Merriwether T Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 1,999 The edge of civilization, Minn...	Good instalment. Short and to the point. Good Henderson. I think that this could be the beginning of a beautiful relationship there. Maybe Lois will throw CJ over for Henderson? I wonder what Lois is going to do to muck up the stake out? Tank (who hopes he doesn't have to wade through another instalment full of yucky stuff before those promised whams come)

Re: Comments: An Extraordinary Man II (20/?) #4037 07/04/03 01:40 AM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 2,992 Sydney Australia T TriciaW Pulitzer
TriciaW Pulitzer T Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 2,992 Sydney Australia	Chris A fantastic part! Your characterization of Henderson is excellent. His conversation with Lois and CJ is great. I can't wait to see what happens at the stakeout. Tricia

Re: Comments: An Extraordinary Man II (20/?) #4038 07/04/03 08:21 AM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 699 Ontario, Canada IreneD Columnist
IreneD Columnist Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 699 Ontario, Canada	I really liked Henderson in this installment. Good job. Looking forward to more, Irene I try to take one day at a time, but sometimes several days attack me at once.

Re: Comments: An Extraordinary Man II (20/?) #4039 07/05/03 04:51 AM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 197 Portland, OR RetroRose Hack from Nowheresville
RetroRose Hack from Nowheresville Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 197 Portland, OR	But yet another great part Chris I (like others before me) loved your Inspector Henderson! Quote "You deserve to be in the holding cell!" snapped Henderson. "But short of that..." He rubbed his hands across his face then said, "I'll not have you jeopardising the operation. If we're going to do this, we've got to do it right, and I don't want you ploughing straight in to the middle of a delicate situation." PERFECT!!!! Chris, I really admire your mastery of language, and your attention to detail is sensational!!!!!! S (who is absolutely LOVING this fic!!! ) "Well, let's see, so far I've been given a glimpse of ritual crop worship, treated as your girlfriend, and I insulted your parents. No, I couldn't have planned this. Mmm, mmm." -- Lois to Clark, 'Green, Green Glow of Home'

Re: Comments: An Extraordinary Man II (20/?) #4040 07/05/03 07:02 AM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 2,380 Likes: 1 The Lone Star State Nan Kerth
Nan Kerth Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 2,380 Likes: 1 The Lone Star State	Yep, you write Henderson as I tend to envision him. He's always been one of my favorite supporting characters. And poor CJ! Maaybe he should give up law and become a reporter... More soon, please. Nan Earth is the insane asylum for the universe.

Re: Comments: An Extraordinary Man II (20/?) #4041 07/07/03 09:27 AM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 484 The near side of the back of b... Krissie OP Beat Reporter
OP Krissie Beat Reporter Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 484 The near side of the back of b...	Ah, you guys continue to be terrific! Quote Heh, I like your Henderson. Quote I like your Henderson also Quote Good Henderson. Quote Your characterization of Henderson is excellent. His conversation with Lois and CJ is great. Quote I really liked Henderson in this installment. Quote I (like others before me) loved your Inspector Henderson! Quote Yep, you write Henderson as I tend to envision him. I'm delighted you all like Henderson... especially because you haven't seen the last of him. Pam: Glad you like the details. Oh, and you'll find out in part 21 where CJ is during the stakeout... Tank: Quote Good Henderson. I think that this could be the beginning of a beautiful relationship there. Maybe Lois will throw CJ over for Henderson? Only in your imagination or in a Tank Ending... which I have no intention of writing. Now, why on earth would you think Lois is going to do anything to muck up that stakeout? Maria, Liz, Merry, Tricia, Irene, RetroRose and Nan, thank you too for your feedback! Chris (who wants to say that you all make me feel very happy!)

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