Comments: An Extraordinary Man II (20/?) - Lois & Clark Fanfic Message Boards

Guest starring Inspector Henderson...

Chris

Heh, I like your Henderson.

Great use of details, too, like the broken filing cabinet drawer digging into CJ's leg... I've been thinking I need to work more on that kind of detail in my own writing

Can't wait to see what the stakeout discovers -- and I wonder where CJ will be while Lois is under policy supervision?

PJ

Hi,

Great part.

Ahh Henderson is on the case..Hooray!

I like the way he wants to cringe everytime they reveal more info! LOL..cool part!

~Liz

Chris
great part
I like your Henderson also
more soon please
merry

Good instalment. Short and to the point.

Good Henderson. I think that this could be the beginning of a beautiful relationship there. Maybe Lois will throw CJ over for Henderson?

I wonder what Lois is going to do to muck up the stake out?

Tank (who hopes he doesn't have to wade through another instalment full of yucky stuff before those promised whams come)

Chris

A fantastic part!

Your characterization of Henderson is excellent. His conversation with Lois and CJ is great.

I can't wait to see what happens at the stakeout.

Tricia

I really liked Henderson in this installment.

Good job. Looking forward to more,
Irene

But yet another great part Chris

I (like others before me) loved your Inspector Henderson!

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"You deserve to be in the holding cell!" snapped Henderson. "But short of that..." He rubbed his hands across his face then said, "I'll not have you jeopardising the operation. If we're going to do this, we've got to do it right, and I don't want you ploughing straight in to the middle of a delicate situation."

PERFECT!!!!

Chris, I really admire your mastery of language, and your attention to detail is sensational!!!!!!

S (who is absolutely LOVING this fic!!!

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Yep, you write Henderson as I tend to envision him. He's always been one of my favorite supporting characters. And poor CJ! Maaybe he should give up law and become a reporter...

More soon, please.

Nan

Ah, you guys continue to be terrific!

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Heh, I like your Henderson.

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I like your Henderson also

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Good Henderson.

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Your characterization of Henderson is excellent. His conversation with Lois and CJ is great.

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I really liked Henderson in this installment.

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I (like others before me) loved your Inspector Henderson!

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Yep, you write Henderson as I tend to envision him.

I'm delighted you all like Henderson... especially because you haven't seen the last of him.

Pam: Glad you like the details.

Oh, and you'll find out in part 21 where CJ is during the stakeout...

Tank:

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Good Henderson. I think that this could be the beginning of a beautiful relationship there. Maybe Lois will throw CJ over for Henderson?

Only in your imagination or in a Tank Ending... which I have no intention of writing.

Now, why on earth would you think Lois is going to do anything to muck up that stakeout?

Maria, Liz, Merry, Tricia, Irene, RetroRose and Nan, thank you too for your feedback!

Chris (who wants to say that you all make me feel very happy!)