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You spin these vignettes out faster than some ladies deliver twins. What can I say? It was a hoot! A knee-slapper! Had me laughing out loud. I wonder if they'll try to stick him in the zoo. ("Look, Johnny. It's the homo-superian. They're endangered. Found only on the East Coast of the USA. Look at that plumage, Johnny. He must be trying really hard to find a mate.") Keep 'em coming.  Elisabeth
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what?????????????
lol
You reallyyyyyyyyyy have to continue this, pleaseeeeee
I just love it, what a great idea, as always, you are a genious.
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That was quick and to the point. Loved it! 
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Hah! I laughed almost as much at Elisabeth's comments as I did at the actual story. Put Superman in a cage, eh, as a "Homo Superian"? And look at that plumage!!! I'll never look at Superman's colorful super suit in the same way again! Well - at least I suppose the zoo keepers will allow the last specimen of Homo Superian to mate in peace, eh? Without onlookers, I mean? Those government people did one thing right, at the very least. Seeing that they were going to force Superman to marry and have a litter of super cubs, at least they had the good sense to force him to marry Lois!!!Hilarious, Mary! Ann
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That was great.
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OMG! You have to continue that one! That was great, I want more!  
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Hi, That was a hoot. I'd love to see more too. Especially when Lois finds out what the project is and who it's with. Oh, unless the government decide to use artificial means.  Yours Jenni
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I loved this! Please you HAVE to continue
Johnny was a chemist,
Now Johnny is no more,
For what he thought was H two O
Was really H two S O four.
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Oh, Mary, you simply must continue this!!!
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Hi, guys!  Wow. This went over a *lot* better than I expected.  Thanks!  I wonder if they'll try to stick him in the zoo. ("Look, Johnny. It's the homo-superian. They're endangered. Found only on the East Coast of the USA. Look at that plumage, Johnny. He must be trying really hard to find a mate.") Well - at least I suppose the zoo keepers will allow the last specimen of Homo Superian to mate in peace, eh? Without onlookers, I mean? They'll have to. I don't have membership in the N-Fic forum. I would love to see Lois' reaction to being in a roomfull of possible "mates" for superman. Mad Dog Lane would turn into a nuclear bomb!!  As for continuing this...We'll see.
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As for continuing this...We'll see. Puh-lease?  I want to know how he'll get out of it - or into it... Whichever.
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Hi!
This can't be the end of "For the Fate of the World" it's begging to be longer, or, is it your new fans! I enjoyed this way to short story and the premise so much. I love a good government conspiracy! Please keep going with this story it has awesome possibilities.
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Whoopsies.. haha
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For one thing, how did they get the needle into his skin? For another, you do have to continue this because merely selecting a mate is not enough for an endangered species; they have to produce offspring.
I think, therefore, I get bananas.
When in doubt, think about time travel conundrums. You'll confuse yourself so you can forget what you were in doubt about.
What's the difference between ignorance, apathy, and ambivalence?
I don't know and I don't care one way or the other.
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LOL! This is just brilliant!! Please continue so we know what happens!  Totally loved it!
Superman: Why is it that good villains never die?
Batman: Clark, what the hell are good villains?
=> Superman/Batman: Public Enemies
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"You take turns, advise and protect one another, even heal or be healed when the going gets too tough. I know! That's not a game--that's friendship!" ~Shelly Mezzanoble, Confessions of a Part-Time Sorceress: A Girl's Guide to the Dungeons & Dragons Game Darcy\'s Place
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Superman: I hear you've been looking for me.
Lois: All my life.
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I just saw the FDK for this and so I immediately started scouring the boards to see what all the fuss was about and oh man did you ever deliver. That was hilarious! And the plumage comment too. Oh dear. I need to stop laughing.
Thanks to CapeFetish for the awesome icon.
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First of all, Thank you to everyone who left FDK. Regarding the sequel: After much Hemming and Hawing, I realized something, and got a wonderful idea. This fic, as I think I said, was originally based on an idea for a Computer Game. As a computer game, *You*, the player, would ultimately be responsible for the outcome of the initial scenario! ...Can you see where I'm going with this? I'm releasing this fic into the wild. It is now part of the Public Domain, like jingle bells. Anyone can write their own take on it---even I could write a take on it! But I want to see what other people can do with it. You can be absurd, or take it seriously. Do what you will. It's all yours, FoLCs! Just remember...CTRL is Jump, Right-Click is Info, and The Shotgun can only be used once every 50000 points. What will happen? Only Time, and YOU, will tell! EDIT: Btw, to answer Woody's question---Kryptonite needle.
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