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Goody, goody. Nan's back with a Home story and I get to be first with the feedback! "Yeah, but that means it isn't on when I put it down. What if Tempus shows up while I'm in the shower?" That would be about like him, wouldn’t it? I’d like to see Lori have twins! "Yeah, but that means it isn't on when I put it down. What if Tempus shows up while I'm in the shower?" Oooh.... Do I see a return of the New Kryptonians? Oh, my gosh, The Planet was bombed. How terrifying! Kidnapped! Again! Remind me who Fred is. And the folks in this time period don’t realize that Clark is the original Superman. Did I remember that right?
~~Even heroes have the right to dream.~~
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Kerth
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Home??? YAY!!!!
Great start, looking forward to more.
Marcus L. Rowland
Forgotten Futures, The Scientific Romance Role Playing Game
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Kerth
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Second story in the series... which relates the events with Gaia's Children... Fred is the copyboy... and a mole  Great start, Nan!  Jose 
"Practice up your shielding spells...and remember to duck if you see green light coming your way." Harry Potter to Wizengamot in OotP trial A Bad Week in the Wizengamot
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OMG it's another "Home" story! SQUEE! "Yeah, but that means it isn't on when I put it down. What if Tempus shows up while I'm in the shower?" I shuddered just thinking about this! Good, snappy chapter, Nan! You've got me hooked!
lisa in the sky with diamonds
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Pulitzer
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WOOHOO!!!!! HOME!!!! More soon please  . Carol [who needs to go reread all the others]
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Pulitzer
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Oh, good gravy, those lunat-- err, I mean, Gaia's children, again? Some people just don't know how to take a hint.
And Fred seriously needs to get a life. (Note, I said *get* a life, not *take* a life, 'cause we don't need any more casualties)
It looks to me, though, like this was the result of careful planning. Bomb the building, force people out, grab one or two of them in the chaos and who would even notice? Tons of superheros about, all too busy paying attention to the building falling down to pay any attention to the people who are already safely outside... or at least, so thinks Gaia's stupid children.
Clark has got to be keeping some track on Lori, she has the earrings as an alarm, and John's telepathic, right? Fred is toast.
And *then* things will start to get really interesting.
PJ
"You told me you weren't like other men," she said, shaking her head at him when the storm of laughter had passed.
He grinned at her - a goofy, Clark Kent kind of a grin. "I have a gift for understatement."
"You can say that again," she told him.
"I have a...."
"Oh, shut up."
--Stardust, Caroline K
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Alright a new Home story!  I have a feeling Fred's in for a unpleasant surprise  Anyway, here's part one. Feel free to nag if the mood strikes you. Mwahahahaha you don't know what you've let yourself in for. Janine 
I Do Whatever My Rice Krispies Tell Me To
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Freelance Reporter
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Cool get Lori away from Fred I love this series
Shelley
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Hi!
One of my favorite writers and one of my favorite series, what more could I ask for? I've been waiting for the continuation of this story and you sure came through with flying colors. Thanks!
G. Kuhn
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Kerth
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Wow! I'm a little surprised by the enthusiastic response. Thanks, everyone. For those who need a refresher course in who is who, go here: http://www.folcsite.com/misc/homegen.JPG This is the Kent Family Tree that Artemis maintains for the Home series. Nan
Earth is the insane asylum for the universe.
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