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FDK: Crisis Of Faith #36405 12/24/06 09:39 PM
Joined: Jun 2006 Posts: 3,166 The Bluegrass State Classicalla OP Pulitzer
OP Classicalla Pulitzer Joined: Jun 2006 Posts: 3,166 The Bluegrass State	Quote She only felt a hollow disconnect . Discontent? ~~~~~ Quote It is the night of our dear Savior’s birth Yes. ~~~~~ Quote Clark checked his watch. “I really should get going.” He gently squeezed her upper arm. “Merry Christmas, Mayson.” Ah, poor Mayson. Ever unrequited love. ~~~~~ Thanks, Crystal. Beautiful fic! ~~Even heroes have the right to dream.~~

Re: FDK: Crisis Of Faith #36406 12/25/06 01:45 AM
Joined: Jun 2006 Posts: 2,513 Likes: 29 Germany bakasi Pulitzer
bakasi Pulitzer Joined: Jun 2006 Posts: 2,513 Likes: 29 Germany	This so reminded me of yesterday evening. We went to the late mass on Christmas Eve at about 11 pm. It was dark (of course) and quite foggy. Our church is on a little hill and when we approached it, we were greeted by "Silent Night". It was played by two trumpets. The trumpeters were standing on the tower and called the people to church. This was just so romantic. I love the christmas spirit in your story. Thanks for sharing, this was a beautiful story. It's never too dark to be cool.

Re: FDK: Crisis Of Faith #36407 12/25/06 05:03 AM
Joined: Jun 2004 Posts: 3,145 Likes: 3 Southwest USA T Terry Leatherwood Pulitzer
Terry Leatherwood Pulitzer T Joined: Jun 2004 Posts: 3,145 Likes: 3 Southwest USA	Classicalla wrote: Quote Quote She only felt a hollow disconnect . Discontent? I think what Angel was trying to say was that her main character (who we all thought was Lois! bad, bad Angel!) felt disconnected from everything around her, as if she were cut off from the other people she passed as she walked. "Discontent" certainly wouldn't have been a wrong choice, but "disconnect" suggests a feeling of isolation and aloneness. /end tech talk Very nice vignette! And I was fooled until the end, too, but it was a nice surprise to see Mayson going through that process. She was one of my favorite secondary characters on the show, and I kinda wish they'd kept her around a little longer. Thank you for the very sweet Christmas present. Life isn't a support system for writing. It's the other way around. - Stephen King, from On Writing

Re: FDK: Crisis Of Faith #36408 12/25/06 07:08 AM
Joined: Oct 2003 Posts: 1,363 Savannah, GA Sheila Top Banana
Sheila Top Banana Joined: Oct 2003 Posts: 1,363 Savannah, GA	Very nice, even though I thought it was Lois who wandered into the church. Merry Christmas...Happy Hannukkah! I'm a firm believer in the fact that God doesn't put any more on us than we can bear. He does however make us come to Jesus every so often.

Re: FDK: Crisis Of Faith #36409 12/25/06 07:55 AM
Joined: Nov 2005 Posts: 504 C_A Columnist
C_A Columnist Joined: Nov 2005 Posts: 504	This was really good. I also thought it was Lois at first. And yeah, "disconnect" works well--a perfect description of Mayson's feelings. Fanfic \| MVs Clark: "Lois? She's bossy. She's stuck up, she's rude... I can't stand her." Lana: "The best ones always start that way." "And you already know. Yeah, you already know how this will end." - DeVotchKa

Re: FDK: Crisis Of Faith #36410 12/25/06 10:01 AM
Joined: Jul 2006 Posts: 2,687 Montreal, Canada LaraMoon Pulitzer
LaraMoon Pulitzer Joined: Jul 2006 Posts: 2,687 Montreal, Canada	ah... dang... it was Mayson? lol Ok... I hate Mayson... I thought it was Lois. LOL! That being said..... it was a really great little vignette! Very moving and very powerful. Loved it. (of course, you know, I might save this to my hard drive and re-write the end a little. hehehe!) Well done! Merry Christmas! Superman: Why is it that good villains never die? Batman: Clark, what the hell are good villains? => Superman/Batman: Public Enemies

Re: FDK: Crisis Of Faith #36411 12/25/06 08:07 PM
Joined: Dec 2005 Posts: 221 Lexington, Ky. angelic_editor Hack from Nowheresville
angelic_editor Hack from Nowheresville Joined: Dec 2005 Posts: 221 Lexington, Ky.	Hi, guys! blinks in amazement Y'all are too kind, I swear. All this lovely feedback spoils me, you know. And ... dons evil hat I'm really, really glad most of you thought it was Lois till the end. Classicalla, I appreciate the sharp eyes! Though I did mean "disconnect," you're right — "discontent" could also work well in its place. Basaki, what a wonderful Christmas Eve you must've had! Thank you so much for sharing such a beautiful, moving story. Terry, there's no need to thank me — thank you for reading! I figured you'd enjoy the Mayson nod. I think she's my favorite secondary character, too. Sheila, C_A and Lara, thank you guys so much for reading, and for your lovely comments. I hope you weren't too disappointed at the end. Again, thank you all so much, and I hope everyone has a terrific holiday! ~ Crystal "Not all those who wander are lost." — JRR Tolkien

Re: FDK: Crisis Of Faith #36412 12/26/06 02:10 AM
Joined: Jul 2006 Posts: 1,883 Florida M MrsMosley Merriwether
MrsMosley Merriwether M Joined: Jul 2006 Posts: 1,883 Florida	Quote And she was thankful. So, so thankful. She’d just wanted to feel something. And right now, she felt so much more than something — she felt grateful for absolutely everything. This was what Christmas was supposed to feel like. I get this feeling listening to "O Holy Night" myself. It is my favorite Christmas song. A great little vignette that could fit right in with Season's Greedings! lisa in the sky with diamonds

Re: FDK: Crisis Of Faith #36413 12/26/06 05:14 AM
Joined: Feb 2006 Posts: 1,437 Smithsburg, Maryland, USA DSDragon Top Banana
DSDragon Top Banana Joined: Feb 2006 Posts: 1,437 Smithsburg, Maryland, USA	"O Holy Night" is my favorite Christmas song too! Especially when I get to sing it. Great fic! "You take turns, advise and protect one another, even heal or be healed when the going gets too tough. I know! That's not a game--that's friendship!" ~Shelly Mezzanoble, Confessions of a Part-Time Sorceress: A Girl's Guide to the Dungeons & Dragons Game Darcy\'s Place

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