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Just caught up with 9 & 10.

Wow, they are on the trail, but I imagine that Robert has some twisted trick up his sleeves.

Looking forward to more from you soon, on all fronts!

James


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Good! Posting quickly wink

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Nan,
I'm so glad you're posting this story again-- and regularly. I love the Supercop series, and your Henderson is wonderful. Keep posting!!

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Great chapter, I am really enjoying this story!


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Great story, Nan, keep writing!

Loved the line about Norma not being any more of a supercop than Henderson lol Considerably less of one, in fact!

And if she doesn't figure that out by the end of the fic, I for one will be very surprised.

PJ


"You told me you weren't like other men," she said, shaking her head at him when the storm of laughter had passed.
He grinned at her - a goofy, Clark Kent kind of a grin. "I have a gift for understatement."
"You can say that again," she told him.
"I have a...."
"Oh, shut up."

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I, too, am reading and very much enjoying this story. You write with a beautiful, natural flow, Nan, and I the feminist am of course enjoying a story where I'm allowed to hate a rapist. All the more so since this man seems a lot more realistic, and also a lot more scary, than someone like, say, Tempus.

But you are making me feel that Norma isn't taking the threat to her person suffciently seriously. Shouldn't she have told her husband? Suppose she does get raped. Okay, I don't think that will really happen, but suppose it did. Wouldn't her husband be terribly upset when he found out that the rape might not have happened if he had been at home, which he would have been if Norma had only told him?

Then again... I think you are very right that many women don't want to think that they could be a target for a rapist. I can easily imagine that Norma would tell herself that she isn't in that much danger, and she shouldn't have to act as if was hiding or asking for protection all the time. And maybe she finds it embarrassing to ask others to constantly protect her. I think many women feel that they don't want to be that kind of a burden, and as for Norma, she is a cop and should be able to take care of herself, right? I guess that may be what she is telling herself.

I'm so interested in seeing how you will wrap all this up, Nan! smile

Ann

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I'm trying to catch up with the feedback threads this morning while I'm babysitting. Trying to keep track of a 2.5 year old boy and his 7 month old sister isn't very conducive to composition <g>.

Anyway, thanks for the feedback, which I very much appreciate. I'm hoping to finish S2 in 3 or maybe 4 more parts and then I can get on to my half-done Christmas story. Hopefully I'll have a few little twists in it that people haven't thought of, but I'm going to try to make it as romantic as I ever can, at least at the end. (Don't anybody expect nfic, though. That just doesn't seem to be something I can write. I guess I'm too inhibited to put something that private down on paper for all to see <g>.)

Nan


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