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Hi, Great story!  Richard watched them go. “She’s decided,” he told his uncle. “Is that post in Paris still open?”
Perry nodded.
“I can choose my own assistant, right?”
“Of course.”
“I’m thinking of asking Penny Landis. I think she’d do a good job for me and she speaks French better than I do. Plus, we’ve hit it off the last couple days.” Yes!  Lois looked out at the newsroom, to the audience outside the conference room. “Besides, your marriage-ability quotient just went up about a thousand fold. A widower with a baby.”
“And what about him? What about . . .?” He made the slightest upward motion with one hand.
“Clark, I promise you, we’ll make this work, after all, they did. And besides, despite the fact that I would like nothing more than to knock your block off for lying to me, erasing my memory, and running off for six years, I’m in love with you. All of you.”
“And I’ve loved you since the first time I saw you. And we will make this work." Could there be more in the future about Clark 1 new life? 
Maria D. Ferdez.
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Don't like Luthor, unfinished, untitled and crossover story, and people that promises and don't deliver. I'm getting choosy with age.
MAF
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I think Clark thought that Lois was keeping the baby for herself. But no, suddenly he is a father! But it sounds like she is going to eventually be raising that baby with him. Good!
I really enjoyed this story, thank you for writing it!
lisa in the sky with diamonds
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Yes, it's been a very enjoyable story! I love how you resolve the situation that Superman Returns left us in. I really feel that Lois and Clark are going to raise both Jason and Esperanza Ester together, and be really happy when they are doing it!
Thank you for this story!
Ann
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I wonder what Jason will think about his new baby sister  They've got some maneuvering to do, but I think from here they can manage just fine. Nice! Good characterization though the whole story -- at least I assume so. You wrote the Clark from SR as kind of, umm, a dork :p But from what I can tell, that's spot on, so way to go! This has been a really complex story, and I mean that as a compliment. PJ
"You told me you weren't like other men," she said, shaking her head at him when the storm of laughter had passed.
He grinned at her - a goofy, Clark Kent kind of a grin. "I have a gift for understatement."
"You can say that again," she told him.
"I have a...."
"Oh, shut up."
--Stardust, Caroline K
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 It's over! Great story. I have a love/hate relationship with the "but it's just the beginning"-type endings, simply because I always want MORE after them. I'm restraining myself from asking for a sequel though, since I know you're currently working on other things. It's been fun!
"You take turns, advise and protect one another, even heal or be healed when the going gets too tough. I know! That's not a game--that's friendship!" ~Shelly Mezzanoble, Confessions of a Part-Time Sorceress: A Girl's Guide to the Dungeons & Dragons Game Darcy\'s Place
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I'm restraining myself from asking for a sequel though, since I know you're currently working on other things. Well, I'm not restraining myself. Since we have to wait three years for SR II, I want the sequel ASAP! Please...try to fit it in your schedule....pretty please???
Chris
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What an awesome story; I really enjoyed this universe combination. I'm also enjoying "After the Storm". "The Final Countdown" was one of my favorite movies. It was nice to see plane-hopping without Tempus or Wells as the engine.  Artemis
History is easy once you've lived it. - Duncan MacLeod
Writing history is easy once you've lived it. - Artemis
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Well, I'm not restraining myself. Since we have to wait three years for SR II, I want the sequel ASAP! Well, I've also got two different SR sequels in the works over at ff.net - Shadows in Darkness (a straight sequel, almost finished), and All I Have To Give an AU where Lois is not a nice person. Please, visit, review, all that good stuff.
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