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Brilliant, Dandello! I'm just sitting on the edge of my seat waiting to see how Lois figures this one out!

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Bring on the love and the pain.
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Great setup! I can't wait to see how this plays out!

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He felt a sharp pain on the inside of his left arm at the elbow when he flexed his arm. There was white gauze taped to his arm, and under it – he loosened the gauze to look – he saw that a plastic tube had been sutured to a vein. The tube was sealed at the ‘open’ end with rubber or vinyl and was filled with some sort of fluid.*

Something felt warm and metallic against his neck and he reached up to find out what it was. His fingers touched a smooth cylinder of metal that went all the way around his neck. It wasn’t tight, luckily, but he couldn’t feel a clasp or even a seam.
This is a seriously freaky situation CK has gotten himself into.

Nice chapter!

P.S. Please mark your chapters with a blue arrow, makes them easier to see. Thanks!


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Great chapter! No time for more right now, but just thought I'd say, "nice job." smile


"You take turns, advise and protect one another, even heal or be healed when the going gets too tough. I know! That's not a game--that's friendship!" ~Shelly Mezzanoble, Confessions of a Part-Time Sorceress: A Girl's Guide to the Dungeons & Dragons Game

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