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Comments: A Hero to Write About 1/? #32438 09/03/06 01:36 PM
Joined: Jul 2006 Posts: 23 Oklahoma City, OK AnnieJ OP Blogger
OP AnnieJ Blogger Joined: Jul 2006 Posts: 23 Oklahoma City, OK	What do you think? This is my very first attempt at fan fiction. Constructive feedback is more than welcome. Edited by admin to include no. of story part in header.

Re: Comments: A Hero to Write About 1/? #32439 09/03/06 02:36 PM
Joined: Jul 2006 Posts: 1,883 Florida M MrsMosley Merriwether
MrsMosley Merriwether M Joined: Jul 2006 Posts: 1,883 Florida	I think it is a great start! lisa in the sky with diamonds

Re: Comments: A Hero to Write About 1/? #32440 09/03/06 06:59 PM
Joined: Jun 2006 Posts: 3,166 The Bluegrass State Classicalla Pulitzer
Classicalla Pulitzer Joined: Jun 2006 Posts: 3,166 The Bluegrass State	Okay, this is good start and for the most part the story seems quite original, and I like the it, BUT the first paragraph sounds very familiar.... ~~Even heroes have the right to dream.~~

Re: Comments: A Hero to Write About 1/? #32441 09/03/06 09:22 PM
Joined: Apr 2004 Posts: 271 japan mmprincess Hack from Nowheresville
mmprincess Hack from Nowheresville Joined: Apr 2004 Posts: 271 japan	Looks promising! Can't wait to see how the storyline develops from here on in.

Re: Comments: A Hero to Write About 1/? #32442 09/04/06 07:48 AM
Joined: Jul 2006 Posts: 23 Oklahoma City, OK AnnieJ OP Blogger
OP AnnieJ Blogger Joined: Jul 2006 Posts: 23 Oklahoma City, OK	Quote Originally posted by Classicalla: *Okay, this is good start and for the most part the story seems quite original, and I like the it, BUT the first paragraph sounds very* familiar....** Is there another story that I am not aware of that has a similar premise? I don't want to copy anyone else's idea.

Re: Comments: A Hero to Write About 1/? #32443 09/04/06 01:40 PM
Joined: Jul 2006 Posts: 2,687 Montreal, Canada LaraMoon Pulitzer
LaraMoon Pulitzer Joined: Jul 2006 Posts: 2,687 Montreal, Canada	Quote Is there another story that I am not aware of that has a similar premise? I don't want to copy anyone else's idea. Nah, I think you're fine. It sounds a tiny little bit like something in one of my stories -- Lois & Clark's son seeks a meeting with Superman and asks himself whether there is any way of getting to see him without having to ask his parents to help. But like I said, I think you're fine. No worries. ...and you have the beginnings of a very interesting story. I'm looking forward to the rest of it! Superman: Why is it that good villains never die? Batman: Clark, what the hell are good villains? => Superman/Batman: Public Enemies

Re: Comments: A Hero to Write About 1/? #32444 09/04/06 09:11 PM
Joined: Jun 2006 Posts: 3,166 The Bluegrass State Classicalla Pulitzer
Classicalla Pulitzer Joined: Jun 2006 Posts: 3,166 The Bluegrass State	The very beginning reminded me of two of Lara's stories, but as you can see she is okay with your story. Carry on! ~~Even heroes have the right to dream.~~

Re: Comments: A Hero to Write About 1/? #32445 09/04/06 10:01 PM
Joined: Apr 2006 Posts: 289 somewhere in the great white n... In4Adventure Hack from Nowheresville
In4Adventure Hack from Nowheresville Joined: Apr 2006 Posts: 289 somewhere in the great white n...	Very nice start! I too look forward to reading more! Looks like Lois and Clark will once again have to think about explaining things soon. I always love reading how close LnC are to their kids! Natascha

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