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#31669 08/16/06 08:09 PM
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Well... wow. This is such a fun story. *aptly avoiding using the word 'cute'* wink

I really enjoyed reading this. Light and fun and just plain sweet in parts. Loved the idea of them having to "fight" though the morning and the idea of Clark keeping count even though he knows Lois will always win the war. <g> This part had me laughing out loud:

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8:45 am

"Lois!"

8:50 am

"Lois!"
Very clever. *again, aptly avoiding 'cute'!*

I did notice one little slip - a 'He' that I think should be a 'His'. Under the 8:15 slot. (He glare faded as he looked down at her face.) Otherwise it was absolutely marvelous. Great story. smile

Dave


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You just kind of stared at me'
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#31670 08/18/06 06:29 AM
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What a great story. Thanks for brightening my day!

Hope to see more like this in the future!! smile1

#31671 08/22/06 12:35 AM
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I just stumbled upon this story, and I absolutely loved it! Thank you *so* much for posting. I'm glad I read it first thing in the morning, now I'm going to have a smile on my face all day long! thumbsup thumbsup


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#31672 08/22/06 12:02 PM
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Is there more to this story or was it a vignette?


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#31673 08/22/06 02:21 PM
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Just a vignette!


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#31674 09/03/06 07:05 AM
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I've just finished reading, and I have to say I loved this vignette a lot!

I'm not gonna use the word 'cute' as I think its been a bit overused in this thread and needs to be left alone to cool down for a bit! wink I will say, however, that this made me laugh and smile and I am really glad I took the time to read it! laugh

#31675 09/05/06 01:19 PM
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So cute! I had to laugh, not only because it was funny, but because I am so much like your Lois in the morning. My husband even cooks for me too!

#31676 09/05/06 03:29 PM
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Delightful story! I saw a lot of Lois in me while reading this story. I never want to get up in the morning, and then I wonder why I am running late.

smile1 AnnieJ

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