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What a great revelation! My favourite kind wherein Clark is left in the dark.
I had fun reading this and can't wait till the rest is posted which will be when??
Irene
I try to take one day at a time, but sometimes several days attack me at once.
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This is great! I love it when Clark is truly confused by Lois and doen't quite know where she's going with something.  More please...soon! 
I'm a firm believer in the fact that God doesn't put any more on us than we can bear. He does however make us come to Jesus every so often.
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Great start. Poor Clark is compelely in the dark. Can't wait for the next part. 
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Hi, Great start.  More ASAP, please. MAF 
Maria D. Ferdez.
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Don't like Luthor, unfinished, untitled and crossover story, and people that promises and don't deliver. I'm getting choosy with age.
MAF
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hhhmmmm...I've been waiting for someone to do something like this. GREAT START! Can't wait for more!
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Interesting start. Clark is really blowing it big time. Is even he this clueless?
Looking forward to more.
Tank (who always thought that Lois' reaction to the 'fuzzing out' of the hologram might have lead to her 'wondering' just what was really up)
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Interesting. I look forward to more soon. Laura
Clark: “If we can be born in an instant, and die in an instant, why can’t we fall in love in an instant?”
Caroline's "Stardust"
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Hahaha!!! Great start, DJ! I don't have any time at all for any in-depth feedback - I'm off to London in 2½ hours for Chrissakes!!! - but I absolutely loved it. Great Lois POV!!!! Loved Clark's squirming!! (And I loved her sniffing Clark's shirt and fantasizing. Sigh! I wish this was the nfic folder, but since it isn't, I'm not going to complain about anything, just grumble quietly under my breath.) Ah, but seriously, I love this, DJ!!!!! Ann
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Hello everyone! I'm tight for time right now so I don't have time to comment on your comments (tee hee). I'll try to in the morning though, just to show my appreciation for your time. Glad you're enjoying it though! I'll be posting part two first thing in the morning.
Thanks for all the wonderful feedback!
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OH, Clark's in such a hole of trouble. I can't wait to see how he comes out of this one!
Jen
"Meg...who let you back in the house?" -Family Guy
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Irene - I'm glad you had fun reading it. The rest will be posted in two parts - one this morning, shortly, and one tomorrow morning. :-)
Me too Sheila! I love confused Clark. More soon is coming up.
Thanks Tayryn! Hopefully you'll think part two is even better.
Hi Maria! Thanks for the fdk!
LCfan86, you've been waiting for something like this? Yeah! I'm glad I could fulfill someone's request. Hope you enjoy the rest.
Hi Tank! Yeah I always felt like Lois had a funny look on her face when she watched that hologram, like she was skeptical. That's what led to this story. :-)
Thanks for feedback Laura!
Ann! You're going out of town? Have a wonderful time! London? Wow! I hope you still get to read while you're gone ;-) Yeah, sorry about the nfic, this one's PG rated, maybe one day... But thanks! Glad you love it!
Hi Jen! So much trouble! He was so bad! I'm off to post part 2 now!
Thank you everyone!!!
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HAHAH! Great stuff. Clark definitely squirms this time. “I wasn’t exactly keeping it a secret from you. To keep something a secret, you have to be asked a question and then deny the answer. You never asked.” Wow! I don’t think even a politician could have put that statement any better.  [...] I didn’t ask you to come up here so we could discuss Superman’s storage facilities. I like that sentence too. I'm off to read the second part! Oh I hope it's posted. CHEERS! ROO
I've converted to lurk-ism... hopefully only temporary.
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