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FDK: A Family Name 1/? #30241 06/04/06 06:57 AM
Joined: Jun 2005 Posts: 74 NJ/NYC ultragirl OP Freelance Reporter
OP ultragirl Freelance Reporter Joined: Jun 2005 Posts: 74 NJ/NYC	Hi! "Oh--as usual--dear." -Giles

Re: FDK: A Family Name 1/? #30242 06/04/06 09:28 AM
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kmar Columnist Joined: Dec 2003 Posts: 516 Maryland	Looks like a great story. I just have one suggestion. On the show Clark always called his parents Mom and Dad. I now it is just me but I find Clark his parents Ma and Pa distracting. I grew up in the country and never heard anyone call their parents Ma and Pa. Maybe really hick types but the Kents of L&C were not that. But great story so keep going.

Re: FDK: A Family Name 1/? #30243 06/04/06 12:22 PM
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archbish99 Hack from Nowheresville A Joined: Sep 2003 Posts: 130	Quote I find Clark his parents Ma and Pa distracting. I grew up in the country and never heard anyone call their parents Ma and Pa. Yeah, I debated that one for a little while -- but since this first segment is coming straight from the comic book, I've tried to preserve their dialogue with only punctuation changes. I'm not sure I've actually heard anyone call their parents "Ma" or "Pa", come to thing of it....

Re: FDK: A Family Name 1/? #30244 06/06/06 10:14 AM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 3,846 Puerto Rico mariadferdez. Pulitzer
mariadferdez. Pulitzer Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 3,846 Puerto Rico	Hi, Great start. Quote "Then where," Clark murmured as he touched his father's shoulder, "do you think I got the courage to do the same thing?" Pulling Pa close, he led him into the living room where Ma waited for them. "'Not like you?' All right, Pa, yes. A 'new identity' -- but. I don't want to stop being Clark Kent. So more like a 'dual identity,' somehow." I'm little confuse with time line? More ASAP, please. MAF Maria D. Ferdez. --- Don't like Luthor, unfinished, untitled and crossover story, and people that promises and don't deliver. I'm getting choosy with age. MAF

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