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Should she have put two and two together a bit quicker? smile

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Nice twist. Though I'm not sure the fallout would have been beneficial for Clark. Anyway, great fun. Thanks.


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Fun twist, but there's one little problem: in the header for this fic, you mistakenly labelled it /1 instead the actual number of chapters. This puts the whole series on its head, you know?


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I loved it. Could have solved a lot of problems with S1 & S2 if it was done this way. Great job.

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This was hilarious! For a moment there I thought Lois was going to faint, wake up and wonder if it was all a dream. Great little story!


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Hi 90stvfangirl!
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< > = Lois attempting telepathy
Oh that’s cute!

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She closed her eyes and concentrated. <Oh god, oh god, Superman, please!> She begged inwardly, hoping for the first time that Superman was indeed telepathic and could hear her silent cries for help.
Oh, now it’s a good thing?

LOIS: Well, I don’t need him to listen to my thoughts about him in the shower.

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Then her body collided with something solid.
Eeep! Did you ever see the Big Bang Theory episode on how Superman catching Lois mid-tumble would slice her in half?

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And wow, could she scream! He almost grinned to himself as he sped up. I’m coming Lois, he thought.
That’s an adorable remark! And will Lois hear him?

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Lois opened her eyes to find herself staring into the concerned face of Clark Kent, who had his arms tight around her waist.
shock

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They were still in the sky! How was this possible? She looked down past their dangling legs and breathed a sigh of relief that she was no longer hurtling toward the earth below.
It’s ‘cause Clark’s a tad full of hot air, thus able to float.

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“We’re flying,” Clark corrected her with a chuckle.

Her breath hitched. “How?”

“I forgot to change into my suit,” he mumbled, shaking his head and giving her a dopey smile.
He’s only able to fly if he’s not wearing his suit!

National Whisper: Superman says he can only fly while naked.

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“But… Clark, I don’t understand.” She was so confused.
Brain damage. He caught her too roughly.

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But Superman— Clark — would he survive?
Depends on the type of radioactive material used in constructing the warhead.

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She rushed around the room, closed all the blinds, then turned to her partner.

They had a lot to talk about.

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What a fun little twist! Clark’s got a lot of learning to do. Only, now he will probably have a teacher. Wait, does that mean The Graduate will be a sequel to The Suit?

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but there's one little problem: in the header for this fic, you mistakenly labelled it /1 instead the actual number of chapters.
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This was such a fun re-visit of this scene!

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< > = Lois attempting telepathy laugh
This is so funny! I love it already!

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I’m coming Lois, he thought.
Awww, this is a sweet moment.

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She must have passed out for a moment because when she came to, she felt a little winded but otherwise alright.
This is such a fun addition! I don't know how she didn't pass out in the original episode. I would have blacked out halfway down!

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How the hell was Clark doing this? Why wasn’t she… splattered on a pavement somewhere?
This really sounds like Lois!

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“I forgot to change into my suit,” he mumbled, shaking his head and giving her a dopey smile.
Aww, poor Clark!

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But Superman— Clark — would he survive?
She hoped.
Oh god, he had to be okay!
The reveal really ramps up the tension of this moment!

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“Hey, everybody, Clark’s alive!” She squealed into his neck. “If Clark’s alive, that means Superman’s alive!
Awww, this is a sweeter moment after the reveal, too!

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They had a lot to talk about.
Great callback!

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Cool little what-if, though now I want to see what happens next!
And the use of Lois' statement of 'If Clark's alive, that means Superman's alive,' was great. grin
I wonder how this woukd have changed things. confused

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Her head snapped up to look at him. “What’s happening?” she asked him. “How are you doing this? We’re… floating.”

“We’re flying,” Clark corrected her with a chuckle.

Her breath hitched. “How?”

“I forgot to change into my suit,” he mumbled, shaking his head and giving her a dopey smile.

EEEEEEE!!! OMG I love this! I love that he corrects her and then with that dopey "I forgot" ... I'm smiling so huge right now!


Oh, what a great little story!! (Though I'm almost inclined to agree with Mary/Queenie in that there seems to be an error in the number of parts you've promised... wink)

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This was fun with a nice twist. I hope you write a sequel. Thanks!


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