FDK: Suits 1/1 - 01/26/24 06:12 AM
Re: FDK: Suits 1/1 - 01/26/24 06:29 AM
Nice twist. Though I'm not sure the fallout would have been beneficial for Clark. Anyway, great fun. Thanks.
Re: FDK: Suits 1/1 - 01/26/24 02:50 PM
Fun twist, but there's one little problem: in the header for this fic, you mistakenly labelled it /1 instead the actual number of chapters. This puts the whole series on its head, you know?
Re: FDK: Suits 1/1 - 01/26/24 04:28 PM
I loved it. Could have solved a lot of problems with S1 & S2 if it was done this way. Great job.
Re: FDK: Suits 1/1 - 01/27/24 06:03 PM
This was hilarious! For a moment there I thought Lois was going to faint, wake up and wonder if it was all a dream. Great little story!
Re: FDK: Suits 1/1 - 01/28/24 03:16 PM
Hi 90stvfangirl!
Oh that’s cute!
Oh, now it’s a good thing?
LOIS: Well, I don’t need him to listen to my thoughts about him in the shower.
Eeep! Did you ever see the Big Bang Theory episode on how Superman catching Lois mid-tumble would slice her in half?
That’s an adorable remark! And will Lois hear him?
It’s ‘cause Clark’s a tad full of hot air, thus able to float.
He’s only able to fly if he’s not wearing his suit!
National Whisper: Superman says he can only fly while naked.
Brain damage. He caught her too roughly.
Depends on the type of radioactive material used in constructing the warhead.
She’s adorable 
What a fun little twist! Clark’s got a lot of learning to do. Only, now he will probably have a teacher. Wait, does that mean The Graduate will be a sequel to The Suit?
Michael
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< > = Lois attempting telepathy
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She closed her eyes and concentrated. <Oh god, oh god, Superman, please!> She begged inwardly, hoping for the first time that Superman was indeed telepathic and could hear her silent cries for help.
LOIS: Well, I don’t need him to listen to my thoughts about him in the shower.
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Then her body collided with something solid.
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And wow, could she scream! He almost grinned to himself as he sped up. I’m coming Lois, he thought.
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Lois opened her eyes to find herself staring into the concerned face of Clark Kent, who had his arms tight around her waist.
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They were still in the sky! How was this possible? She looked down past their dangling legs and breathed a sigh of relief that she was no longer hurtling toward the earth below.
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“We’re flying,” Clark corrected her with a chuckle.
Her breath hitched. “How?”
“I forgot to change into my suit,” he mumbled, shaking his head and giving her a dopey smile.
Her breath hitched. “How?”
“I forgot to change into my suit,” he mumbled, shaking his head and giving her a dopey smile.
National Whisper: Superman says he can only fly while naked.
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“But… Clark, I don’t understand.” She was so confused.
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But Superman— Clark — would he survive?
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She rushed around the room, closed all the blinds, then turned to her partner.
They had a lot to talk about.
The end
They had a lot to talk about.
The end
What a fun little twist! Clark’s got a lot of learning to do. Only, now he will probably have a teacher. Wait, does that mean The Graduate will be a sequel to The Suit?
Originally Posted by Queen of the Capes
but there's one little problem: in the header for this fic, you mistakenly labelled it /1 instead the actual number of chapters.
Michael
Re: FDK: Suits 1/1 - 01/30/24 06:09 AM
This was such a fun re-visit of this scene!
This is so funny! I love it already!
Awww, this is a sweet moment.
This is such a fun addition! I don't know how she didn't pass out in the original episode. I would have blacked out halfway down!
This really sounds like Lois!
Aww, poor Clark!
The reveal really ramps up the tension of this moment!
Awww, this is a sweeter moment after the reveal, too!
Great callback!
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< > = Lois attempting telepathy laugh
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I’m coming Lois, he thought.
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She must have passed out for a moment because when she came to, she felt a little winded but otherwise alright.
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How the hell was Clark doing this? Why wasn’t she… splattered on a pavement somewhere?
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“I forgot to change into my suit,” he mumbled, shaking his head and giving her a dopey smile.
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But Superman— Clark — would he survive?
She hoped.
Oh god, he had to be okay!
She hoped.
Oh god, he had to be okay!
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“Hey, everybody, Clark’s alive!” She squealed into his neck. “If Clark’s alive, that means Superman’s alive!
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They had a lot to talk about.
Re: FDK: Suits 1/1 - 02/03/24 04:34 PM
Cool little what-if, though now I want to see what happens next!
And the use of Lois' statement of 'If Clark's alive, that means Superman's alive,' was great.
I wonder how this woukd have changed things.
And the use of Lois' statement of 'If Clark's alive, that means Superman's alive,' was great.
I wonder how this woukd have changed things.
Re: FDK: Suits 1/1 - 02/10/24 12:41 AM
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Her head snapped up to look at him. “What’s happening?” she asked him. “How are you doing this? We’re… floating.”
“We’re flying,” Clark corrected her with a chuckle.
Her breath hitched. “How?”
“I forgot to change into my suit,” he mumbled, shaking his head and giving her a dopey smile.
“We’re flying,” Clark corrected her with a chuckle.
Her breath hitched. “How?”
“I forgot to change into my suit,” he mumbled, shaking his head and giving her a dopey smile.
EEEEEEE!!! OMG I love this! I love that he corrects her and then with that dopey "I forgot" ... I'm smiling so huge right now!
Oh, what a great little story!! (Though I'm almost inclined to agree with Mary/Queenie in that there seems to be an error in the number of parts you've promised...
)Sara
Re: FDK: Suits 1/1 - 03/05/24 10:24 PM
This was fun with a nice twist. I hope you write a sequel. Thanks!