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LOL! This was cute. I like the Clark take charge personality. Maybe he'd be able to better tame his beast if he had a took charge attitude in other instances.

Great story!!

I have been lurking around this board a few weeks and just pop up and say how much this story made me smile

Loved how Clark took the situation in hand or should I say Lois in hand

Kara

Well, it was indeed strange to see Clark lose his patience like that. Although I liked Lois a lot. So... Lois

Fun piece!

See ya,
AnnaBtG.

Thank you Sheila, Kara and Anna!

Glad that you enjoyed it. This was a little different than the normal romances I like to write but I really enjoyed going to that extreme with this one.

Clark wouldn't normally act this for various reasons:

1) Lois wouldn't stand for it
2) Martha would have him by the ear for his behaviour towards Lois
3) He's to sweet and to much of a gentleman

But at times I like to write a story where the Leading Man (Clark) acts like assertive 'Alpha' male.

Glad you liked it and thank you for your comments.

Tayryn

Tayryn

A great story! I thoroughly enjoyed it.

Tricia

Good story!

Now to the Archive

Jose

Thank you Natascha, Tricia and Jose.

I'm really glad you enjoyed this story. I had a lot of fun writing it. Most of my other stories for another show are angsty but for some reason, for my Lois and Clark stories, I love to write them as happy and upbeat.

Me too, I would have been so embrassed for poor Lois but while writing it, I had a little imp on my shoulder poking at me to take it further.

I'm not really sure how to post to the archive, Jose. But I'll try and see how it's done. I've just been posting at my two home addresses.

Thank you,

Tayryn

This link will help you get your story ready for the Archive:
http://www.lcfanfic.com/faq_archive.html#storyready

When you're done, just email your story at stories@lcfanfic.com

Hope I've helped!
See ya,
AnnaBtG.

Loved the story. Made me laugh a lot. Thank you. I liked the way Clark reacted and teased her. I also liked the kissing scenes and the way the others reacted. Nice ending. *smile*

Thank you.

Very cute and totally fun! Keep on writing Tayryn.

Jackie

Tayryn - your story should come with a warning:

Caution: Do not read at work or while drinking hot liquids.

Ha ha ha!

Thank you Tahu, Jackie and DJ Rhodes.

Glad that I was able to make you laugh. I'll remember to post a warning about not drinking and reading at the same time for the next one.

Thanks for the link, Anna. I was going to shift through the postings until I found it but this made it a lot easier.


Tayryn

Just in case anyone else is wondering - no need to trawl through posts. There's a stickied thread at the very top of the Fanfic folder with all the details on how to Archive your finished story.