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FDK: Murder Over Metropolis 10/12 #297838 10/23/23 07:06 AM
Joined: Jul 2017 Posts: 572 Likes: 12 Southern Pines, NC CarrieRene OP Columnist
OP CarrieRene Columnist Joined: Jul 2017 Posts: 572 Likes: 12 Southern Pines, NC	Previously in Murder Over Metropolis, Captain Benson once again interrupted an important moment between Lois & Clark. Afterward, Lois & Clark started going through Lois's notes and realized Gretchen Kelly could be involved. Enjoy Part 10, where Lois & Clark struggle with some hard truths. Thank you, once again, for all of the great feedback. Part 10 Last edited by CarrieRene; 10/23/23 07:07 AM.

Re: FDK: Murder Over Metropolis 10/12 CarrieRene #297840 10/23/23 11:13 AM
Joined: Jun 2006 Posts: 2,513 Likes: 29 Germany bakasi Pulitzer
bakasi Pulitzer Joined: Jun 2006 Posts: 2,513 Likes: 29 Germany	Ahh, it seems like Lois and Clark finally have a bit of luck. I love how you portrayed Clark's anger. Usually, he just seems okay with being rejected and just gives Lois time to move back to bring friends. But it totally makes sense that he'd need time, too. It's never too dark to be cool.

Re: FDK: Murder Over Metropolis 10/12 CarrieRene #297876 10/29/23 03:51 PM
Joined: Apr 2010 Posts: 3,661 Likes: 10 Somewhere on the East Coast Morgana Pulitzer
Morgana Pulitzer Joined: Apr 2010 Posts: 3,661 Likes: 10 Somewhere on the East Coast	Quote Clark had left her apartment just after twelve thirty, when Lois had started nodding off at the table trying to stay awake. They’d set a plan for the next day, including locating Gretchen Kelly, going back to LexCorp, and checking on Mrs. Cox at the hospital. Right off the bat they are working together, but there is so much that must be resolved between them! Quote Captain Benson cleared his throat and looked from Lois over to the woman lying in the hospital bed. “Mrs. Cox was just informing me that Lex wasn’t supposed to die,” he said. Talk about dropping a bomb! Captain Benson makes me very nervous. Great mystery here! But especially what's happening between Lois and Clark. Morgana A writer's job is to think of new plots and create characters who stay with you long after the final page has been read. If that mission is accomplished than we have done what we set out to do, which is to entertain and hopefully educate.

Re: FDK: Murder Over Metropolis 10/12 Morgana #297886 10/31/23 12:01 PM
Joined: Jul 2017 Posts: 572 Likes: 12 Southern Pines, NC CarrieRene OP Columnist
OP CarrieRene Columnist Joined: Jul 2017 Posts: 572 Likes: 12 Southern Pines, NC	Originally Posted by bakasi Ahh, it seems like Lois and Clark finally have a bit of luck. I love how you portrayed Clark's anger. Usually, he just seems okay with being rejected and just gives Lois time to move back to bring friends. But it totally makes sense that he'd need time, too. Yes, they are finally working together. Portraying Clark's anger can be hard to write when he's such a good guy. Thank you for the feedback. Originally Posted by Morgana Quote Clark had left her apartment just after twelve thirty, when Lois had started nodding off at the table trying to stay awake. They’d set a plan for the next day, including locating Gretchen Kelly, going back to LexCorp, and checking on Mrs. Cox at the hospital. Right off the bat they are working together, but there is so much that must be resolved between them! Oh yes, even more that needs to be resolved. Quote Captain Benson cleared his throat and looked from Lois over to the woman lying in the hospital bed. “Mrs. Cox was just informing me that Lex wasn’t supposed to die,” he said. Talk about dropping a bomb! Captain Benson makes me very nervous. Great mystery here! But especially what's happening between Lois and Clark. Thank you, Morgana. Yes, Captain Benson can make anyone nervous. I love mysteries.

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