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#297137 08/02/23 09:50 PM
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Chapter 2: Heal

This will likely become a little series I work on off and on....

Thoughts? And if you have any ideas, feel free to share ^_^

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This will likely become a little series I work on off and on....
Yay! hyper

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“The sun is much stronger, and when I really need it, it feels . . . hm, like warm sparkling water, spreading over and through me," Superman said, smiling.
Cute! smile

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"He's remembering something," Jon pointed out helpfully.

Jon always knew.
Jon has Clark's empathy. He's such a good kid, he would make a great super hero. I still hope, but each season it becomes more unlikely. frown

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"They . . . they said I was weird," Jordan said, wiping his eyes.

"Weird? Who? Why?" Superman asked.

"At school," he muttered, trying not to cry more than he already was.

He couldn't be a baby in front of Superman!

"I said the sun tickled and they laughed and said I was weird and that that’s not how the sun feels at all." He ducked his head. “They . . . they were mean.”
Poor Jordan. frown Maybe his problems were magnified by early signs of powers and he didn't know what it was. sad

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Superman swallowed and took a slow deep breath before giving him a hesitant smile.

“Hey, bud,” he finally greeted.

“Dad!” Jon shouted.
That reveal worked so much better than in the show! grin

Thank you for sharing! It was a nice story! clap

Andreia


"My wife's love is what unites Krypton and Earth in my heart. Without it, without her, I truly would be in hell."

~ Superman: Man of Tomorrow #15
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I think some of Jordan's issues stemmed from some of his senses being elevated/randomly fluctuating and him not understanding what was happening so suppressing it, which just fed on itself.

Anyway, glad you enjoyed ^_^


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