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Best birthday ever? And someone is getting a little sloppy with his wooing. Magic?

*melts* I love this story! Yes, best birthday ever! The only way he could have topped it would have been to be at her door when he told her to open it. Watching the movie together that way is very sweet. The American President is a funny movie. I’m glad Clark was able to make Lois’s birthday so special. I just hope it wasn’t a mistake to spike her curiosity. He might have to reveal his secret sooner than he planned. I can’t wait for tomorrow’s chapter! Thanks to you and Kathy for this gem!

So good, so amazingly good. I think this is my favorite part so far. I love how Clark reveals bits and pieces about himself, hinting at the fact that he can do things noone else could. Still, he's careful not to say too much. Ahh, can't wait for that next chapter

MAGIC indeed! Only better. This is the real deal!

Not sure it was a smart idea to write something this good so early. The bar is now so high; how could you possibly top it! I know—MAGIC, right?

Brilliant storytelling. Thank you!

Hee! I love this comment (and all the comments!), but at the risk of setting the bar even higher ... keep reading! We haven't even gotten to the good stuff yet!

Absolutely the best birthday and yes it is very sloppy on Clark’s part. As much as I’m swooning right now, he should have known better to tread carefully and not have Lois start to piece things together especially with respect to his own handwriting being on the cards with the flowers he sent when he was meant to be ordering these from halfway across the country.

Love that Lois is confiding in Cat because it’s obvious that she genuinely cares for Lois and wants her to be happy.

Can’t wait for the next part. I echo Penny_Lane the bar has indeed been set high.

Flowers say it all. But really Cat, can't a girl have anything on her desk without you reading it?

By the way, I love the book club!