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FDK: One Last Look (1/1) #290874 01/21/22 12:29 PM
Joined: Feb 2010 Posts: 4,424 Likes: 1 Delaware L Lynn S. M. OP Pulitzer
OP Lynn S. M. Pulitzer L Joined: Feb 2010 Posts: 4,424 Likes: 1 Delaware	I was aiming for poignant, but I hope it wasn't too over the top. All feedback appreciated.

Re: FDK: One Last Look (1/1) Lynn S. M. #290876 01/21/22 01:09 PM
Joined: Apr 2010 Posts: 3,763 Likes: 18 Somewhere on the East Coast Morgana Pulitzer
Morgana Pulitzer Joined: Apr 2010 Posts: 3,763 Likes: 18 Somewhere on the East Coast	Nope. It was just right. Morgana A writer's job is to think of new plots and create characters who stay with you long after the final page has been read. If that mission is accomplished than we have done what we set out to do, which is to entertain and hopefully educate.

Re: FDK: One Last Look (1/1) Lynn S. M. #290877 01/21/22 01:18 PM
Joined: Feb 2010 Posts: 4,424 Likes: 1 Delaware L Lynn S. M. OP Pulitzer
OP Lynn S. M. Pulitzer L Joined: Feb 2010 Posts: 4,424 Likes: 1 Delaware	Whew. Thanks, Morgana.

Re: FDK: One Last Look (1/1) Lynn S. M. #290883 01/22/22 08:20 AM
Joined: Jun 2006 Posts: 2,611 Likes: 39 Germany bakasi Pulitzer
bakasi Pulitzer Joined: Jun 2006 Posts: 2,611 Likes: 39 Germany	Very touching. I could feel the tears prick in my eyes. Well done, Lynn It's never too dark to be cool.

Re: FDK: One Last Look (1/1) Lynn S. M. #290884 01/22/22 10:41 AM
Joined: Feb 2010 Posts: 4,424 Likes: 1 Delaware L Lynn S. M. OP Pulitzer
OP Lynn S. M. Pulitzer L Joined: Feb 2010 Posts: 4,424 Likes: 1 Delaware	Hello Barbara, Thank you. I really appreciate your taking the time and energy to leave feedback, not just for this story but for all my stories. Thanks for "feeding the writer." Be well, Lynn

Re: FDK: One Last Look (1/1) Lynn S. M. #290891 01/23/22 01:03 PM
Joined: Jun 2006 Posts: 2,611 Likes: 39 Germany bakasi Pulitzer
bakasi Pulitzer Joined: Jun 2006 Posts: 2,611 Likes: 39 Germany	You're welcome. I know how much a writer relies on this kind of food. It's never too dark to be cool.

Re: FDK: One Last Look (1/1) Lynn S. M. #290895 01/24/22 07:33 AM
Joined: Jun 2004 Posts: 3,147 Likes: 3 Southwest USA T Terry Leatherwood Pulitzer
Terry Leatherwood Pulitzer T Joined: Jun 2004 Posts: 3,147 Likes: 3 Southwest USA	Excellent work, Lynn. You showed us her tragedy without wallowing or being maudlin. I envisioned a girl of about fifteen in this story who will miss her parents and her brother for the rest of her life. We don't even know what happened, just that it was probably abrupt, and it's still too raw for her to say the words even to herself. I had pinpricks in my eyes at the end. I wish I could have learned how to write like this when I was younger. Life isn't a support system for writing. It's the other way around. - Stephen King, from On Writing

Re: FDK: One Last Look (1/1) Lynn S. M. #290897 01/24/22 09:25 AM
Joined: Feb 2010 Posts: 4,424 Likes: 1 Delaware L Lynn S. M. OP Pulitzer
OP Lynn S. M. Pulitzer L Joined: Feb 2010 Posts: 4,424 Likes: 1 Delaware	Hello Terry, Thank you for coming back from semi-retirement from this site to read and comment on my story. I am honoured. I envision the tragedy being a car accident involving her parents and her brother, but since I deliberately left the inciting incident out of the story, my thoughts on it aren't canon; imagine whatever you wish. Your kind words have made my day. Joy, Lynn

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