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FDK: Veterans of Foreign Wars - 23/25 #287542 08/13/20 08:28 AM
Joined: Jun 2004 Posts: 3,145 Likes: 3 Southwest USA T Terry Leatherwood OP Pulitzer
OP Terry Leatherwood Pulitzer T Joined: Jun 2004 Posts: 3,145 Likes: 3 Southwest USA	Now it gets intense. Life isn't a support system for writing. It's the other way around. - Stephen King, from On Writing

Re: FDK: Veterans of Foreign Wars - 23/25 Terry Leatherwood #287554 08/16/20 12:47 PM
Joined: Apr 2010 Posts: 3,661 Likes: 10 Somewhere on the East Coast Morgana Pulitzer
Morgana Pulitzer Joined: Apr 2010 Posts: 3,661 Likes: 10 Somewhere on the East Coast	Yup, very intense part! Poor Carol Sherman. Trask is a sick man. Quote Lois wondered where the bullet had gone. She painfully pushed herself to her feet and began limping toward her best friend and the man she loved. Suddenly a look of horror appeared on Clark’s face. He stared wide-eyed at his left hand. It was dripping blood. Poor Cat. Morgana A writer's job is to think of new plots and create characters who stay with you long after the final page has been read. If that mission is accomplished than we have done what we set out to do, which is to entertain and hopefully educate.

Re: FDK: Veterans of Foreign Wars - 23/25 Terry Leatherwood #287572 08/21/20 12:00 PM
Joined: Jun 2004 Posts: 3,145 Likes: 3 Southwest USA T Terry Leatherwood OP Pulitzer
OP Terry Leatherwood Pulitzer T Joined: Jun 2004 Posts: 3,145 Likes: 3 Southwest USA	Hi, Morgana. Sorry about Carol, but I wanted to show Trask as a sociopathic person hiding behind the American flag. I hope no one misses him. I see you believe that the blood is Cat's. Are you sure? Clark's not super-powered right now. No hints or spoilers intended. Next chapter up momentarily. Life isn't a support system for writing. It's the other way around. - Stephen King, from On Writing

Re: FDK: Veterans of Foreign Wars - 23/25 Terry Leatherwood #287581 08/22/20 10:54 PM
Joined: Mar 2008 Posts: 397 Likes: 1 ~Philadelphia, PA AmyPrime Beat Reporter
AmyPrime Beat Reporter Joined: Mar 2008 Posts: 397 Likes: 1 ~Philadelphia, PA	Trask really is a madman here. Carol Sherman's death makes me upset. She didn't even get to make a contribution to his downfall, as far as I can tell. She just got snuffed out. It reflects the unfairness of life. At least Trask is dead so hopefully her daughter will be safe, though motherless. The rest of the action was captivating. I'm nervous to see what comes next.

Re: FDK: Veterans of Foreign Wars - 23/25 Terry Leatherwood #287582 08/23/20 10:35 AM
Joined: Jul 2014 Posts: 911 Likes: 2 East Coast USA cuidadora Features Writer
cuidadora Features Writer Joined: Jul 2014 Posts: 911 Likes: 2 East Coast USA	Intense it is. This story is excellent, very compelling. I'm awed by how well you craft these characters for your story. I also feel badly for Carol Sherman and her family. Hope she has a guardian for the girl. It does very much show Trask's psychosis and evilness. What a cliffhanger! Cuidadora "Honey, we didn't care if you were a Russian or a Martian... You were ours... and we weren't giving you to anybody." ~ Martha in Strange Visitor "A love that risks nothing is worth nothing." ~ Jonathan in Big Girls Don't Fly

Re: FDK: Veterans of Foreign Wars - 23/25 Terry Leatherwood #287593 08/27/20 11:55 AM
Joined: Jun 2004 Posts: 3,145 Likes: 3 Southwest USA T Terry Leatherwood OP Pulitzer
OP Terry Leatherwood Pulitzer T Joined: Jun 2004 Posts: 3,145 Likes: 3 Southwest USA	Hi, Amy. Again, I'm sorry about Carol, but when one deals with psychopathic sociopaths (or sociopathic psychopaths), one may - literally - place one's life in that insane person's hands. The Trask I'm writing is so crazy that he believes that neither the law nor any moral standards apply to him. While Carol didn't materially contribute to taking down Trask, she tried. And that has to count for something. Thank you for your kind words, cuidadora. I worked hard on presenting these characters as fully fleshed people, and my beta team helped tremendously. Final chapter up soon! Life isn't a support system for writing. It's the other way around. - Stephen King, from On Writing

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