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FDK: Street Fair - Part Two of Two #285646 09/26/19 06:21 AM
Joined: Apr 2010 Posts: 3,661 Likes: 10 Somewhere on the East Coast Morgana OP Pulitzer
OP Morgana Pulitzer Joined: Apr 2010 Posts: 3,661 Likes: 10 Somewhere on the East Coast	If any readers are a little confused about what's going on. This is part of my Visitor series which actually begins with A Lovely Smile and ends with A Wedding in Paris. Feel free to look them up in the archives. Please place all comments here. Last edited by Morgana; 09/29/19 12:42 PM. Morgana A writer's job is to think of new plots and create characters who stay with you long after the final page has been read. If that mission is accomplished than we have done what we set out to do, which is to entertain and hopefully educate.

Re: FDK: Street Fair - Part Two of Two Morgana #285650 09/26/19 04:25 PM
Joined: Jul 2014 Posts: 911 Likes: 2 East Coast USA cuidadora Features Writer
cuidadora Features Writer Joined: Jul 2014 Posts: 911 Likes: 2 East Coast USA	What a sweet story! Bernie and Abrihet are perfect for each other. Your descriptions are so delightful, I feel like I'm at a banquet of words. If I start quoting my favorite passages, the whole chapter will end up here. It's wonderful to see Lois and Clark have friends in on the secret who can share and make the street fair and shopping an adventure to be treasured. Loved seeing them break into pairs by gender to go shopping. And the contrast in shops each pair chooses. Well done! Thanks for the excuse to go back and re-read all the stories in this series! Cuidadora "Honey, we didn't care if you were a Russian or a Martian... You were ours... and we weren't giving you to anybody." ~ Martha in Strange Visitor "A love that risks nothing is worth nothing." ~ Jonathan in Big Girls Don't Fly

Re: FDK: Street Fair - Part Two of Two Morgana #285652 09/27/19 09:36 AM
Joined: Jul 2010 Posts: 3,883 Pensacola, Florida KenJ Pulitzer
KenJ Pulitzer Joined: Jul 2010 Posts: 3,883 Pensacola, Florida	As always, very sweet. Well doe. Herb replied, “My boy, I never say … impossible.” "Lois and Clarks" My stories can be found here kj

Re: FDK: Street Fair - Part Two of Two Morgana #285664 09/29/19 09:46 AM
Joined: Apr 2010 Posts: 3,661 Likes: 10 Somewhere on the East Coast Morgana OP Pulitzer
OP Morgana Pulitzer Joined: Apr 2010 Posts: 3,661 Likes: 10 Somewhere on the East Coast	Cuidadora Quote It's wonderful to see Lois and Clark have friends in on the secret who can share and make the street fair and shopping an adventure to be treasured. Loved seeing them break into pairs by gender to go shopping. And the contrast in shops each pair chooses. Having friends to share things like street fairs and fun secrets are important. That's something which could not be shown on the show. Quote Thanks for the excuse to go back and re-read all the stories in this series! hyper Morgana purrs in happiness: Please do! Last edited by Morgana; 09/29/19 12:43 PM. Morgana A writer's job is to think of new plots and create characters who stay with you long after the final page has been read. If that mission is accomplished than we have done what we set out to do, which is to entertain and hopefully educate.

Re: FDK: Street Fair - Part Two of Two Morgana #285665 09/29/19 12:41 PM
Joined: Apr 2010 Posts: 3,661 Likes: 10 Somewhere on the East Coast Morgana OP Pulitzer
OP Morgana Pulitzer Joined: Apr 2010 Posts: 3,661 Likes: 10 Somewhere on the East Coast	KenJ Quote As always, very sweet. Well done. Your beta work is always the best! Morgana A writer's job is to think of new plots and create characters who stay with you long after the final page has been read. If that mission is accomplished than we have done what we set out to do, which is to entertain and hopefully educate.

Re: FDK: Street Fair - Part Two of Two Morgana #285677 10/02/19 06:43 AM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 163 Likes: 5 Wheeling, IL R Ray Hack from Nowheresville
Ray Hack from Nowheresville R Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 163 Likes: 5 Wheeling, IL	Morgana always has a great feel for this type of story. She can empathize with the characters, getting into their heads in a way that is unique. This whole series is a wonderful read. Ray

Re: FDK: Street Fair - Part Two of Two Morgana #285721 10/08/19 04:22 PM
Joined: Apr 2010 Posts: 3,661 Likes: 10 Somewhere on the East Coast Morgana OP Pulitzer
OP Morgana Pulitzer Joined: Apr 2010 Posts: 3,661 Likes: 10 Somewhere on the East Coast	Ray Quote She can empathize with the characters, getting into their heads in a way that is unique. Hello my friend, thank you for the kind comment! Bernie is an established character whose gentle nature is always easy and relaxing to write. Abrihet was a bit more of a challenge, all I had to go on was one line mentioned by Clark in the pilot. Creating a full-fleshed character from such thin cloth sometimes had me scratching my head in frustration. With the help of Sydney, an FoLC who at one time lived in Paris, the Nigerian princess slowly came into creation. Creating stories from thin cloth is what writing is all about! Something you are very well aware of. Morgana A writer's job is to think of new plots and create characters who stay with you long after the final page has been read. If that mission is accomplished than we have done what we set out to do, which is to entertain and hopefully educate.

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