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FDK: Investigate - Chapter 13/? #285473 08/24/19 08:53 PM
Joined: Jan 2019 Posts: 1,028 Likes: 22 Central/Eastern USA Blueowl Top Banana
Blueowl Top Banana Joined: Jan 2019 Posts: 1,028 Likes: 22 Central/Eastern USA	Nearing the end of 'Season 1'.... Comments appreciated Chapter 13 Last edited by Blueowl; 08/24/19 09:12 PM.

Re: FDK: Investigate - Chapter 13/? Blueowl #285487 08/27/19 06:51 PM
Joined: May 2003 Posts: 758 Likes: 2 L L Features Writer
L Features Writer L Joined: May 2003 Posts: 758 Likes: 2	I love this chapter. The entirety of awkwardness of the ice scream spill was perfect. This series is lovely.

Re: FDK: Investigate - Chapter 13/? Blueowl #285557 09/04/19 08:51 PM
Joined: Sep 2005 Posts: 37 Calmar, Iowa G G. Kuhn Blogger
G. Kuhn Blogger G Joined: Sep 2005 Posts: 37 Calmar, Iowa	I am following this story eagerly waiting for each post. Did you post chapter 14? I thought you had but I can’t access it or find it now. G. Kuhn

Re: FDK: Investigate - Chapter 13/? L #285560 09/06/19 09:01 PM
Joined: Jan 2019 Posts: 1,028 Likes: 22 Central/Eastern USA Blueowl Top Banana
Blueowl Top Banana Joined: Jan 2019 Posts: 1,028 Likes: 22 Central/Eastern USA	Originally Posted by L I love this chapter. The entirety of awkwardness of the ice scream spill was perfect. This series is lovely. Thanks, L ^_^ I was craving ice cream during that scene :P Originally Posted by G. Kuhn I am following this story eagerly waiting for each post. Did you post chapter 14? I thought you had but I can’t access it or find it now. I'm working on that part now. Unfortunately, things have gotten busy with kids returning to school and the muse is not cooperating. I will post as soon as I can though! Glad you're enjoying the story, thanks for reviewing

Re: FDK: Investigate - Chapter 13/? Blueowl #285565 09/07/19 03:14 PM
Joined: Apr 2010 Posts: 4,135 Likes: 79 Somewhere on the East Coast Morgana Pulitzer
Morgana Pulitzer Joined: Apr 2010 Posts: 4,135 Likes: 79 Somewhere on the East Coast	Quote The high pitched whine cut through his mind, shattering his hold on the images as a thrum of imminent danger rattled his whole being like a sledgehammer to the side of the head. Intense description of a man attempting to recover from massive memory loss. I could feel his pain... Morgana A writer's job is to think of new plots and create characters who stay with you long after the final page has been read. If that mission is accomplished than we have done what we set out to do, which is to entertain and hopefully educate.

Re: FDK: Investigate - Chapter 13/? Blueowl #285589 09/10/19 01:43 PM
Joined: Apr 2013 Posts: 1,426 Likes: 5 Tulsa, OK Mike M Top Banana
Mike M Top Banana Joined: Apr 2013 Posts: 1,426 Likes: 5 Tulsa, OK	Just read the entire story (so far) so I am now caught up. I just love how you flesh out the minor characters of the story. Eleanor and the security guard for instance. Sometime you involve them further in the story (Elanor for instance) and sometimes not but either way in improves the depth of the story so much. I am really enjoying the slightly alternate universe and how the story flows. Right now I can't wait for Chapter 14. Mike Create all the happiness you are able to create. Remove all the misery you are able to remove. Jeremy Bentham

Re: FDK: Investigate - Chapter 13/? Blueowl #285655 09/27/19 07:59 PM
Joined: Jul 2017 Posts: 308 Middle US JellyS2 Beat Reporter
JellyS2 Beat Reporter Joined: Jul 2017 Posts: 308 Middle US	Finally found some time to read! Excellent chapter! Nothing like imminent danger to get those super powers back to working. Hoping to read some more soon. "Oh my gosh! Authors really do use particular words on purpose!" ~Me, when I started writing a book.

Re: FDK: Investigate - Chapter 13/? Mike M #285692 10/05/19 04:57 PM
Joined: Jan 2019 Posts: 1,028 Likes: 22 Central/Eastern USA Blueowl Top Banana
Blueowl Top Banana Joined: Jan 2019 Posts: 1,028 Likes: 22 Central/Eastern USA	Morgana--- I figure someone who can hear a butterfly's wing beat would have to find that very jarring in that moment. Mike M--- I like having 'normal' people impact main characters or give the reader some perspective from an 'outsider'. JellyS2--- Yup, it's the best motivator. Thanks for the comments ^_^ Next chapter and end of this Act will be posted shortly.

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