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Chapter 11. Another chapter in the same day! Both are pretty short but have important points to make. Making Clark into a miserable person was not as hard as putting Lois happily with Lex, but it wasn’t easy. I felt the need to apologize to both of them constantly. I’m sorry Lois and Clark. Lex made me do it .

Hopefully some of your questions have been answered and having Part 2 behind you, you understand how we got into this tangled mess. Knowing what you know now, what kinds of things are you thinking?

yeah yeah, how much did Lex pay you to do it? haha haha

I'm thinking there will be a separate layer of Hell just for Luthor. Yup.

Zilch! He is evil!

With Superman-themed wallpaper and pictures of Lois and Clark happily together everywhere.

Go with your instincts, Lois!



Brilliant excuse!


Lex, trying to be solicitous. Not sure what's on that breakfast tray, but apparently it never occurred to him there could be an association between bringing the tray close to her in the other room and her immediate stomach upset.


Oh, Clark! Your life is just


The false memories have deliberately (my first guess) or inadvertently contributed to Clark feeling even more alone with what he at least sees as loss of -- or perhaps he believes he never had -- Martha and Jonathan's unconditional automatic love and support. Lex, you've caused a rift in the parent-child relationship here.

I have a feeling that when their memories return you'll find you've awakened not only Mad Dog Lane, but also Mama and Papa Bear Kent.

Another excellent chapter.

I'm happy/sad I successfully got that across. .

Thanks! I'm glad you are still enjoying it!

To be honest, enjoying is not the right term. I appreciate the quality of your writing and the plot intricacies, but there's too much pain and darkness so far for me to consider it an enjoyable tale.

Fair enough. I've certainly felt that way before. In that case, I'm glad your still reading it. I promise I put all the toys back in the box.

This is the most broken Clark ever. I hate it.

I'm sorry. I feel the same way. I felt so bad about writing him this way that when I met Dean Cain at a comicon in March, I apologized to him.

If you need to know ahead of time:I really should make a graph (or several) of emotion(s) vs chapter... but that would be quite the spoiler in itself. Maybe after I'm done posting it.