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Chapter 7 is here. This is the only chapter that is features only Scott. I know you guys are itching to learn more about him. Hopefully these little glimpses help you form a more complete picture. You may recognize the second scene (or not) from Ultrawoman, at the beginning when Clark sits and contemplates. It was fun to write that from the perspective of someone watching. And also fun to interrupt it with something different wink.

Thanks for reading and posting feedback!


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another great chapter but Clark better think twice about doing this.


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Originally Posted by LadyTpower
another great chapter but Clark better think twice about doing this.
Thanks, LadyT! Did you read chapter 8 yet? It does address that very thing smile.


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another great chapter but Clark better think twice about doing this.
Thanks, LadyT! Did you read chapter 8 yet? It does address that very thing smile.

Just read it lol


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“Actually, due to our current position within the solar system, Superman will have to make this choice within the next eleven days or we’ll lose the ability to use the …” The look Clark was aiming at Dr. Klein stopped him. “Right. Eleven days.”

“Why don’t we give you guys some time to talk about it,” Scott put in. “With Superman of course. And you can get back to us as soon as possible?”

I am really starting to not like this guy Scott. How dare he draw Bernie into Lex's plan! splat


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Originally Posted by Morgana
I am really starting to not like this guy Scott. How dare he draw Bernie into Lex's plan! splat
It wasn't entirely his idea, if that helps. wink After all, he does what he's told.


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I am really starting to not like this guy Scott. How dare he draw Bernie into Lex's plan! splat
It wasn't entirely his idea, if that helps. wink After all, he does what he's told.

He may also not know Bernie very well. I get the impression that his opinion of him may not be very high, possibly because he thinks he was so easily fooled.

Following orders without question? Is he so flattered that Lex and Hightower trusted him that he's not even considering the ethics of what they're doing? Time will tell if his paycheck may be clouding his judgement. Although, he also may not understand everything that's planned for Clark, Lois and the whole country.

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Scott rolled his eyes as he caught sight of Lane and Kent in a what could only be described as a tender embrace. Clark Kent seemed like a … goober. How on Earth did he catch someone like Lois Lane? Of course, he was Superman. This was ridiculous…and Scott was a little jealous.

Makes me wonder if Scott has a crush on Lois. That could complicate things for Lex, but Scott had better be very careful. He doesn't have a very high opinion of Clark, either. Yet Scott at least appears to be a bit nerdy himself.

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“Superman has to go,” Lois broke in. She stood up and walked to Clark.

Oh, Lois, now you're jumping in without checking the water level for not only yourself but Clark and his family. wallbash

Although if they survive this mess, it could be interesting how they react if the New Krytonians show up in the universe... maybe a sequel?

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“Actually, due to our current position within the solar system, Superman will have to make this choice within the next eleven days or we’ll lose the ability to use the …” The look Clark was aiming at Dr. Klein stopped him. “Right. Eleven days.”

Nice touch; don't give them time to really consider this. Just enough time I assume to make preparations.And now you have me wondering what Dr. Klein didn't mention. Hopefully that will eventually be explained.



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Originally Posted by cuidadora
He may also not know Bernie very well. I get the impression that his opinion of him may not be very high, possibly because he thinks he was so easily fooled.
You are right there! Fooled by the scenario, fooled by the glasses. He also sees Klein as lacking many other skills despite his scientific intelligence.

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Following orders without question? Is he so flattered that Lex and Hightower trusted him that he's not even considering the ethics of what they're doing? Time will tell if his paycheck may be clouding his judgement. Although, he also may not understand everything that's planned for Clark, Lois and the whole country.
Right on both accounts. Remember his mother was in a car accident and can't work and his sister is quite a bit younger and he feels responsible for her. And at this point he has no idea exactly what they are doing.

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Makes me wonder if Scott has a crush on Lois. That could complicate things for Lex, but Scott had better be very careful. He doesn't have a very high opinion of Clark, either. Yet Scott at least appears to be a bit nerdy himself.
Scott is quite nerdy, or he very much wants to be even though he never really felt very smart growing up since he was so average compared to everyone else.

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Oh, Lois, now you're jumping in without checking the water level for not only yourself but Clark and his family. wallbash
wink Its ingrained in her!

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Although if they survive this mess, it could be interesting how they react if the New Krytonians show up in the universe... maybe a sequel?
Yeah, unintentional. The plot ran away from me on this front. This wasn't worked out until near the end of writing (when I was maybe 60% through) and I was as surprised as you.

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Nice touch; don't give them time to really consider this. Just enough time I assume to make preparations.And now you have me wondering what Dr. Klein didn't mention. Hopefully that will eventually be explained.
I'm glad you brought this up. It wont be answered, so I'll happily fill you in smile. See, in space travel that involves leaving the orbit of one planet and trying to reach another that is farther away (or outside the solar system), they use a trajectory path that takes advantage of something called a "gravity assisted maneuver" or "gravity slingshot" to give the, in this case, person traveling a boost in speed. This is how space probes and smaller vessels are sent to planets like Mars and further out into the solar system. Without it, it takes additional fuel (or effort in Superman's case) to be able to travel away from the sun. In order for it to work, the relative positions of Earth, Sun, and the destination have to form something of a check mark shape with the sun at the vertex. The next time it would be in the right location would be the next time the Earth was at that point in its revolution - one year out (give or take). I stopped Klein in the middle of the explanation because in the show he's often given to rambling or giving too much information and cut off by a comment or look and to further the impression of the swiftness with which this is all happening. grin I was also worried I would type too much about just exactly how that works (which I hope I didn't do just now).

Thanks for the feedback, I just love the peek into what readers are thinking grin.



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So this story has got myvhooked even if we have seen very little Clark Kent and no Superman.

The most intriguing thing to me is that it opens a way to make Superman Returna liveable movie. The plot wholes are too big in that film unless there is another layer, a layer that makes it so that everyone believes things happened that didnt.

Here my biggest question is why does Scott turn on Luthor.

I also say I always like stories that retroactively write Bernard Klein into the story. This might not quite put him earlier than we first see him but it may put him even all the time way to the he Pilot if he was Jimmy's STAR labs link from day one.


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Originally Posted by John Lambert
So this story has got myvhooked even if we have seen very little Clark Kent and no Superman.

The most intriguing thing to me is that it opens a way to make Superman Returna liveable movie. The plot wholes are too big in that film unless there is another layer, a layer that makes it so that everyone believes things happened that didnt.
Not my favorite film, but you are right. I hadn't thought of that. Finally a reason that made him leave in the first place.

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Here my biggest question is why does Scott turn on Luthor.
All in good time. smile

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I also say I always like stories that retroactively write Bernard Klein into the story. This might not quite put him earlier than we first see him but it may put him even all the time way to the he Pilot if he was Jimmy's STAR labs link from day one.
Yeah, I always thought Superman new Klein earlier than we were introduced to him since they seemed to have a history together. This only brings him in a little earlier than the show. Klein could have easily been involved much earlier.

Thanks for chiming in!


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