Thanks for the feedback. It's always good to know that some people out there read this. So it's more fun to write.
@Ladytpower: Thanks, but the story isn't over yet. I plan to write a few parts more. I haven't written it yet, but I will. I plan to post once a week or so. Perhaps on th eweekend the next part will be up.
@Endelda: Yes, I was always fascinated by the telepathy thing and sad that this was never mentioned after BGDF anymore. I love stories where Clark/Kal-El is telepathic with Lois. A telepathy challenge by "Mouserocks" gave me the idea. We will see where it goes... I have some ideas going around in my mind but I'm not to solid yet.
@Baksi: Interesting that you liked the english version better, because I had written the german one and than translated it with a little help from a translation programme. Funny thing, this.
@Blueowl: Tnaks. Good question, I thought about that. We'll see in the future.
Bye,
Nick