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So, this is my first try to write a fanfic. It's a bit short, but we'll see...
It's a response to Mouserock's Telepathy challenge.
Feedback welcome and apreciated.

I love this little story good job

This is a really interesting premise, I can't wait to see where you take it!

I, too, like the premise. It's not often that we have stories translated in another language. I'm one of the few people around here who can read both versions. Francly, I like the English version better. I'm curious how you will continue from here. Having Clark appear as a ghost certainly is a new take on TOGOM.

Definitely good start, I enjoyed it. I wonder how far the telepathy can go, distance wise.
Looking forward to the next part.

Thanks for the feedback. It's always good to know that some people out there read this. So it's more fun to write.
@Ladytpower: Thanks, but the story isn't over yet. I plan to write a few parts more. I haven't written it yet, but I will. I plan to post once a week or so. Perhaps on th eweekend the next part will be up.
@Endelda: Yes, I was always fascinated by the telepathy thing and sad that this was never mentioned after BGDF anymore. I love stories where Clark/Kal-El is telepathic with Lois. A telepathy challenge by "Mouserocks" gave me the idea. We will see where it goes... I have some ideas going around in my mind but I'm not to solid yet.
@Baksi: Interesting that you liked the english version better, because I had written the german one and than translated it with a little help from a translation programme. Funny thing, this.
@Blueowl: Tnaks. Good question, I thought about that. We'll see in the future.
Bye,
Nick

Interesting start. It'll be interesting to see how this progresses.
Congratulations on posting chapter 1 of your story!