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FDK: You Stepped Out of a Dream (Weekly Kerth Challenge #2) #283240 01/13/19 04:24 PM
Joined: Jul 2017 Posts: 296 Middle US JellyS2 OP Hack from Nowheresville
OP JellyS2 Hack from Nowheresville Joined: Jul 2017 Posts: 296 Middle US	Whew! That was the first thing I've ever posted. Excited! Hope you enjoy it. "Oh my gosh! Authors really do use particular words on purpose!" ~Me, when I started writing a book.

Re: FDK: You Stepped Out of a Dream (Weekly Kerth Challenge #2) JellyS2 #283241 01/13/19 05:13 PM
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LadyTpower Beat Reporter L Joined: Oct 2018 Posts: 438 Belgium	Welcome in the world of the writers. Loved your first fic. Hope to read many more * once a Lois and Clark fan, always a Lois and Clark fan *

Re: FDK: You Stepped Out of a Dream (Weekly Kerth Challenge #2) JellyS2 #283251 01/14/19 09:56 AM
Joined: Dec 2004 Posts: 1,702 Canada J jackiek Merriwether
jackiek Merriwether J Joined: Dec 2004 Posts: 1,702 Canada	Welcome Jelly! Well done! Superman: I hear you've been looking for me. Lois: All my life.

Re: FDK: You Stepped Out of a Dream (Weekly Kerth Challenge #2) JellyS2 #283267 01/15/19 01:07 AM
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Deadly Chakram Nobel Peace Prize Winner Joined: May 2011 Posts: 6,142 Likes: 2 Connecticut	Congrats on your first story! (I promise, it gets way less scary and a lot more thrilling from here on out.) Very sweet story! I can just imagine Lois getting all fan-girly writing the email to Lucy. Nice explanation as to her surprise too. After all, it was clear she had feelings for him and anyone with 2 working eyes could see he'd been smitten from the moment he met her. Battle On, Deadly Chakram "Being with you is stronger than me alone." ~ Clark Kent "One little spark of inspiration is at the heart of all creation." ~ Figment the Dragon

Re: FDK: You Stepped Out of a Dream (Weekly Kerth Challenge #2) JellyS2 #283320 01/20/19 09:54 AM
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folc4evernaday Pulitzer Joined: Jan 2009 Posts: 4,025 Birmingham, AL	Hey Julie congrats on your first story. I love this look into Lois' mind at this point. The date question was a big turning point for this duo. Nicely done. ~ Folc4evernaday Jodi Picoult - You might not write well every day, but you can always edit a bad page. You can't edit a blank page. https://loisclarktribute.com Subscribe on YouTube

Re: FDK: You Stepped Out of a Dream (Weekly Kerth Challenge #2) JellyS2 #283328 01/20/19 07:41 PM
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cuidadora Features Writer Joined: Jul 2014 Posts: 911 Likes: 2 East Coast USA	Congratulations on posting your first story! What a great way to start. I loved this peek into Lois's thoughts and feelings. Cuidadora "Honey, we didn't care if you were a Russian or a Martian... You were ours... and we weren't giving you to anybody." ~ Martha in Strange Visitor "A love that risks nothing is worth nothing." ~ Jonathan in Big Girls Don't Fly

Re: FDK: You Stepped Out of a Dream (Weekly Kerth Challenge #2) JellyS2 #283384 01/22/19 10:50 PM
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OP JellyS2 Hack from Nowheresville Joined: Jul 2017 Posts: 296 Middle US	Thanks guys! I'm glad you liked it! I enjoyed writing it. "Oh my gosh! Authors really do use particular words on purpose!" ~Me, when I started writing a book.

Re: FDK: You Stepped Out of a Dream (Weekly Kerth Challenge #2) JellyS2 #283397 01/24/19 11:31 AM
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Morgana Pulitzer Joined: Apr 2010 Posts: 3,662 Likes: 10 Somewhere on the East Coast	Welcome to the boards! Great first effort! Quote Lucy! Have I got a story for you! It won’t have an ending yet, but I just had to tell someone and so I’m emailing you now. Oh neat! A story with Lucy in it! The e-mail concept is very good, we get to look in on Lois' thoughts. This sounds like the kind of e-mail or letter sisters might exchange, especially when one of them is interested in a certain young man. Ah what memories ... Quote So, there you have it, Lucy. I can see you doing some silly happy dance. But maybe you were right. I just had to wait for Mr. Right to step out of my dream. Tell anyone and I’ll kill you. Your loving sister, Lois LOL! Yes, definitely an exchange between sisters! Great writing, all of us on the boards are looking forward to reading more from you. Morgana A writer's job is to think of new plots and create characters who stay with you long after the final page has been read. If that mission is accomplished than we have done what we set out to do, which is to entertain and hopefully educate.

Re: FDK: You Stepped Out of a Dream (Weekly Kerth Challenge #2) Morgana #284023 03/11/19 10:46 PM
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OP JellyS2 Hack from Nowheresville Joined: Jul 2017 Posts: 296 Middle US	Originally Posted by Morgana Oh neat! A story with Lucy in it! The e-mail concept is very good, we get to look in on Lois' thoughts. This sounds like the kind of e-mail or letter sisters might exchange, especially when one of them is interested in a certain young man. Ah what memories ... I'm glad you liked it! I got it from a book I read over the summer, Pamela, by Samual Richardson (written in 1740, cumbersome to read but I loved it anyway). I was hoping the format would help keep it short (still working on that epic of mine...) Quote LOL! Yes, definitely an exchange between sisters! A stolen from my own letters to my sister Quote Great writing, all of us on the boards are looking forward to reading more from you. Thank you! I'm anxious to post more in the near future! Julie "Oh my gosh! Authors really do use particular words on purpose!" ~Me, when I started writing a book.

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