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FDK: Jealousy in her Heart (1/1) #283151 01/09/19 05:37 AM
Joined: Dec 2003 Posts: 2,082 Riverside, California groobie OP Kerth
OP groobie Kerth Joined: Dec 2003 Posts: 2,082 Riverside, California	Jealousy in her Heart When I saw the words in the prompt, I challenged myself to use them in atypical ways. It was written with no beta and a short time frame, but it made me happy to dip my toes back into the L&C universe. Enjoy! You can find my stories as Groobie on the nfic archives and Susan Young on the gfic archives. In other words, you know me as Groobie.

Re: FDK: Jealousy in her Heart (1/1) groobie #283157 01/09/19 11:00 AM
Joined: Oct 2018 Posts: 438 Belgium L LadyTpower Beat Reporter
LadyTpower Beat Reporter L Joined: Oct 2018 Posts: 438 Belgium	Loved this little story. it would fit nicely in the actual episode * once a Lois and Clark fan, always a Lois and Clark fan *

Re: FDK: Jealousy in her Heart (1/1) groobie #283161 01/09/19 04:08 PM
Joined: Apr 2010 Posts: 3,661 Likes: 10 Somewhere on the East Coast Morgana Pulitzer
Morgana Pulitzer Joined: Apr 2010 Posts: 3,661 Likes: 10 Somewhere on the East Coast	Hi Groobie! Quote Lois rolled her eyes. “What do women want? Men have been asking that question since the Wife of Bath told her tale.” She put her hands to her hips. “That woman wants riches, flattery, and fame.” What a cool crossover! Lois and Clark meets The Canterbury Tales! Toni Taylor perfectly fits that description, her brother refused to listen to her plans for bringing the family 'business' into legitimate deals, thus denying her power. Pity she ran afoul of Lex Luthor, Toni would have been a much better choice of a female master criminal than Mindy Church. Quote “Your girlfriend can take care of herself,” Lois chided. “I’m going to try and find Superman…somewhere. You go warn the police. Metropolis is about to burn.” Clark nodded quickly and then took off running down the block and around the corner. ‘Metropolis will burn,’ Lois thought as she watched Clark run away. Just like the jealousy in her heart. Ah, Mr. Kent, the lady is really serious ... be careful! Morgana A writer's job is to think of new plots and create characters who stay with you long after the final page has been read. If that mission is accomplished than we have done what we set out to do, which is to entertain and hopefully educate.

Re: FDK: Jealousy in her Heart (1/1) groobie #283163 01/09/19 07:54 PM
Joined: Dec 2004 Posts: 1,702 Canada J jackiek Merriwether
jackiek Merriwether J Joined: Dec 2004 Posts: 1,702 Canada	I really enjoyed this. I love jealous Lois. Superman: I hear you've been looking for me. Lois: All my life.

Re: FDK: Jealousy in her Heart (1/1) groobie #283178 01/10/19 03:24 PM
Joined: Apr 2007 Posts: 8,948 Likes: 28 Darth Michael Boards Chief Administrator Nobel Peace Prize Winner
Darth Michael Boards Chief Administrator Nobel Peace Prize Winner Joined: Apr 2007 Posts: 8,948 Likes: 28	Hi Susan! Quote Toni Taylor ever since the suspiciously blonde wench suspiciously blonde — nice one! Quote had oozed her way out of Clark Kent’s apartment. Tracking Toni had inevitably led her to the Riverview District and into a position to observe Toni’s meeting with the Toasters. So, basically, half the stories Lois or Clark get are because they are jealous of the other’s dealings with the opposite sex. Lois and Toni. Lois and Antoinette. Lois and Linda. Clark and Lex. Quote “I followed you,” he whispered before nodding his head in Toni’s direction, “while you followed her.” Clark observed Toni She sure maintains a double standard, huh? LOIS: There is no double standard. There’s the things Clark’s allowed to do and there’s the way I do things. Not a double standard. Quote Wife of Bath Quote “And presumably since she showed up unannounced at your doorstep in the middle of the night, sexual pleasure.” So, Lois acknowledges that Clark can provide sexually pleasing services to a woman? Maybe she has even thought about said service providing for herself? Quote Clark blushed. “That’s never going to happen.” “Not if I can help it,” Lois muttered. Quote “Cross that deadline and see what happens,” She’s going to literally dead here, I’m assuming. Quote rubber. “Duck!” Now that’s cheating! LOIS: It’s a perfectly valid use of the words ‘rubber duck’. JIMMY: Yes, text search would find that passage when searching for the phrase ‘rubber duck’. Quote He yanked Lois away from the piled crates, tucking her into his arms as they dashed behind a large cardboard box. I think he crossed a line there. Quote Lois felt a frisson of anger well inside her: at Clark for ignoring her pointed warning See? Quote and at herself for failing to hear him following her so closely. No, he didn’t follow her until she stumbled. Quote ‘Metropolis will burn,’ Lois thought as she watched Clark run away. Just like the jealousy in her heart. Awww, poor girl. Still several months away from being able to encourage Clark to…help her to properly deal with her feelings. You used those prompts quite aptly! Michael Join us on the #loisclark Discord server! We talk about fanfic, our favorite show, life, and more! (It’s almost like the IRC days of old again!) I go by Michael on the Archives.

Re: FDK: Jealousy in her Heart (1/1) Darth Michael #283205 01/12/19 01:18 PM
Joined: Aug 2016 Posts: 179 France Millefeuilles Hack from Nowheresville
Millefeuilles Hack from Nowheresville Joined: Aug 2016 Posts: 179 France	I simply adore when you cheat! Quote ... But in her haste, she tripped over a hose made of rubber. “Duck!” Clark warned with an urgent hush... What a great story! As always, the characters are spot on, the storyline is clever, the style is polished and the sparks fly between our beloved characters. What a treat! Sentences like Quote the suspiciously blonde wench had oozed her way out of Clark Kent’s apartment make my toes wriggle with pleasure.

Re: FDK: Jealousy in her Heart (1/1) groobie #283221 01/13/19 05:50 AM
Joined: Dec 2003 Posts: 2,082 Riverside, California groobie OP Kerth
OP groobie Kerth Joined: Dec 2003 Posts: 2,082 Riverside, California	Awwww, thanks everyone for the kind words. I maintain that I didn't cheat, I just engaged in creativity. But then again, I wouldn't have challenged Lois on the word "chumpy." Susan, whose only skirts she owns are the ones on the edges You can find my stories as Groobie on the nfic archives and Susan Young on the gfic archives. In other words, you know me as Groobie.

Re: FDK: Jealousy in her Heart (1/1) groobie #283321 01/20/19 11:33 AM
Joined: Jan 2009 Posts: 4,025 Birmingham, AL folc4evernaday Pulitzer
folc4evernaday Pulitzer Joined: Jan 2009 Posts: 4,025 Birmingham, AL	Hey Groobie! I know I'm late on the FDK. Sorry been a crazy few weeks. I love your creative use of the words. This is a beautiful and insightful look into Lois' inner thoughts and musings regarding Clark early in their partnership. It would have been an interesting turn of events if Clark had been more intuitive and followed Lois following Toni. Thanks for the read. ~ Folc4evernaday Jodi Picoult - You might not write well every day, but you can always edit a bad page. You can't edit a blank page. https://loisclarktribute.com Subscribe on YouTube

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