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Tomatoes, rotten vegetables, and squishy fruit goes here.
/me dives into a foxhole
BrightFeather
“Rules only make sense if they are both kept and broken. Breaking the rule is one way of observing it.”
--Thomas Moore
"Keep an open mind, I always say. Drives sensible people mad, I know, but what did we ever get from sensible people? Not poetry or art or music, that's for sure."
--Charles de Lint, Someplace to Be Flying
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Laura This is heart-wrenching.  Rachel is just beginning to trust and feel safe with Lois and Clark. And her natural father arrives, yikes!  I hope that you intend to fix this situation. Please do not let anything else happen to Rachel.  I can't wait to see what happens next. Tricia 
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Adoption law is insane. That judge is willing to traumatize Rachel all over again, just because of a few strands of DNA? At the very least, she ought to have been allowed to get to know the man, first! Post the next part soon, Laura.  PJ
"You told me you weren't like other men," she said, shaking her head at him when the storm of laughter had passed.
He grinned at her - a goofy, Clark Kent kind of a grin. "I have a gift for understatement."
"You can say that again," she told him.
"I have a...."
"Oh, shut up."
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Columnist
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Yes, Laura, hurry and fix this family! Rachel's father--  And poor Lois and Clark--  Help them! They can't be apart for Christmas! 
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Hey Laura You have to fix this quickly.... Poor Rachel, Lois and Clark Meni
Is it a bird?" "Is it a plane?" "No, it's just a guy in tights and a cape!"
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Okay is anyone else crying? I'm crying. Keep posting Jen
"Meg...who let you back in the house?" -Family Guy
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Hi, Beautiful!  Poor Timmy.  Does criminal are well organize. They bring the kids, they have doctors, the medication, Medical Examiner too. Probable good Lawyer for adoption paper and people will a lot of money to adopt. Clark leaned over and stole a quick kiss from Lois as they watched Rachel get acquainted with both sets of grandparents. "They're spoiling her rotten," Clark observed as Lois leaned back against him.
"I know," she agreed, "I'm a bit surprised--my mother hasn't been all that supportive about this, but she's right in there with a Madam Alexander doll for Rachel."
Maria D. Ferdez.
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Don't like Luthor, unfinished, untitled and crossover story, and people that promises and don't deliver. I'm getting choosy with age.
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Do you have a more stable posting schedule now or is it still going to be erratic? Just curious..
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We only have two chapters left to go. Unfortunately, or maybe fortunately <g> the chapters keep getting longer. Chapter 6 was 28 pages long, and Chapter 7 before my beta readers saw it, was 30. I don't know how long the final chapter will be because it's barey begun. I think that the story will be finished by July...
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“Rules only make sense if they are both kept and broken. Breaking the rule is one way of observing it.”
--Thomas Moore
"Keep an open mind, I always say. Drives sensible people mad, I know, but what did we ever get from sensible people? Not poetry or art or music, that's for sure."
--Charles de Lint, Someplace to Be Flying
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This was, this was, I hope you post more soon Laura, Jose
"Practice up your shielding spells...and remember to duck if you see green light coming your way." Harry Potter to Wizengamot in OotP trial A Bad Week in the Wizengamot
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Fix this Laura
soon please
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oops. Cross posting in 5 places'll make a girl forget.  Thanks for the comments, y'all. Chapter 7 is up, with a few... unresolved issues left for Chapter 8. Thank you Tricia, Pam, Robin, Meni, Jen, Maria, Ja-10, Jose, and Merry. BF
“Rules only make sense if they are both kept and broken. Breaking the rule is one way of observing it.”
--Thomas Moore
"Keep an open mind, I always say. Drives sensible people mad, I know, but what did we ever get from sensible people? Not poetry or art or music, that's for sure."
--Charles de Lint, Someplace to Be Flying
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