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(You can thank Folc for this being posted today, because she answered my question. Thanks!)

Yay! You posted! Thank you to both of you.

I like how Clark handled the hold up quickly and it got them onto the path of him being Superman. Loving how Lois is trying not to have feelings for Clark and that she’s letting him get to know Havana better. I’m hoping Dr.Klein will have some answers for them. Looking forward to more!

Delightful part, nicely played.

What is it with Batman lately? Everyone wants to be Batman. (I ended up reading an article about reading Batman comics to help with writing this morning)

Lois as Clark's muse. I like that. I like how Clark was able to handle the guys holding up Mike's restaurant. Love how Lois is giving Clark a chance and even Dr. Klein a chance.

Thanks! Glad you liked it. I didn't want to draw out the robbery thing for too long, it's not too important.

Yes, there is still some attraction between them (because there's only so long you can ignore a soul mate...) More answers and more Havana to come... And soon!

Thanks so much! Glad you're enjoying it so far.

I like to throw in a random character or two, especially since on the show we never got any of that, but now with the CW shows we get crossovers all over the place. It's a nerd's dream.

Thanks. I thought it was a cute idea. More chances to come.

I have a photo on my computer that was obviously taken at a Star Wars convention. It shows a half-dozen or more attractive young women in Leia metal bikini outfits having a pillow fight. The caption reads "Somewhere a nerd only has two wishes left."

Putting Superman and Batman in the same story is a lot like that.

Anyway, I like this story. I'm glad your muse spilled out that last line in the first chapter instead of whatever you had originally planned. Being a dad and a granddad, I want to see more of that cute little pixie Havana, but I understand why you're focused on Lois and her relationship with Clark instead. I, too, like the way the relationship is progressing, how Clark wants to be a huge part of their lives but is unwilling to crash into them, and how Uncle Mike knew everything about Clark except what he looked like. He's so strong when he's protecting her.

I also like the way Clark dealt with the attempted armed robbery, impressing Lois by not trying to be the big bad man who opens up a can of butt-whoopin' under any and all provocations. It made her understand how different he really is inside while emphasizing his outside differences. Well done. (And I was chewing my nails thinking that this would be a major stumbling block for her.) Kudos for the Superman hints, too.

Bernie better have something good to tell them. That's all I have to say on the subject right now.

Until next time (Is it up yet? Is it up yet? Is it up yet? No? Nuts!).

Just found this story yesterday and I'm really enjoying it. I've been away from the boards for a while and it is refreshing to catch up.
And I've forgotten how to put in quotes, but I like this. "I like to throw in a random character or two, especially since on the show we never got any of that, but now with the CW shows we get crossovers all over the place. It's a nerd's dream."
Speaking of crossovers, I'm doing Supergirl, The Flash, and Legends of Tomorrow through all seasons. I gave up on Arrow, but did see the foursome combo.
ready for some more
Artemis

Mouse, with each chapter, this little gem of a story keeps getting better and better! So totally waiting to hear what Bernie has to say!

So cool that not only is Lois in on the secret, she still gets to help him come up with a way to be Superman without endangering his secret. Now that everything else is out of the way, can we see Havana again? She is such a cutie!

Too true. Although realistically, it would be Batman and Superman (and the Flash, etc.) having the half-naked pillow fight... if it were my nerd wish.

Glad you like it so much! I will say the original plan was just for it to be about Havana, or rather any mention of a child, but this was much more tempting of an idea, and I found a way to make both work.

Don't worry. There's always going to be more Havana (next chapter and more). I'm even half tempted (and you didn't hear this from me) to write a sequel to this story... or two. Depending on a lot of factors. But that's a rumor for now. Only one project at a time for Mouse (even though that's a lie, there's three in progress).

/bows/ Thanks. What's that phrase? Over-aggressive, testosterone-filled show-off never won fair lady?

Chapter 8 is up!

Artemis! Long time no see! Glad you're liking this story so far. Hope you stay a while.

That's so funny because I also dropped Arrow. Flash is my current DC love/obsession, because it has a similar feel to Lois and Clark, and they've had me hooked since episode one with Harrison Wells (and they haven't been able to push me away once). I still have to catch up on some Supergirls though.

Thanks! Bernie is on deck in the next chapter. I like the idea of Lois knowing everything up front (ish). And yes, lots more Havana time to come!

I got behind in my commenting, but I enjoyed this part and it made me excited to read the next chapter.

Now we'll get Superman!
I'm really enjoying the story.

Another excellent chapter! I’m enjoying this fic very much.

Your Uncle Mike is a perfectly delineated character with such few brush strokes. Bravo!
And I relished Bill Henderson’s irony, even if he’s a little heavy on sarcasms. He hasn’t forgotten how to add 2 + 2.

So, at long last, Superman is about to appear. I love the idea of Lois being SM’s Muse… and I keep my fingers crossed for Bernie to find a cure.