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Thank you ahead of time for the feedback on Caught In The Act, my short fanfiction of Lois getting caught doing something fun.
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Cute! We rarely get to see Lois let down her hair, so to speak, in this fashion. And to Madonna of all people!  Hilarious! I would've loved to see Lois's reaction to Clark's applause, though. Maybe there'll be a sequel of Lois trying to catch Clark doing something just as silly.
VirginiaR.
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The perfect summer fanfic!  I can see Lois belting out that sing with happy abandon. Glad Clark got to see his wife doing something so out of character!
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A writer's job is to think of new plots and create characters who stay with you long after the final page has been read. If that mission is accomplished than we have done what we set out to do, which is to entertain and hopefully educate.
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Cute! We rarely get to see Lois let down her hair, so to speak, in this fashion. And to Madonna of all people! Hilarious! I would've loved to see Lois's reaction to Clark's applause, though. Maybe there'll be a sequel of Lois trying to catch Clark doing something just as silly. Thank you. And that is a very good idea. Now we just have to think of a good song that would be perfectfor Clark.
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hehe this turned out cute! I agree, Clark should be the next one to be caught doing something funny and out of character. Maybe Superman got caught dancing in the shower haha...
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hehe this turned out cute! I agree, Clark should be the next one to be caught doing something funny and out of character. Maybe Superman got caught dancing in the shower haha... I do like it turned out. Thank you once again for the help. Now we just have to find the perfect song. Any ideas?
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Now we just have to find the perfect song. Any ideas? I don't know if you saw the Julia Roberts's film Sleeping with the Enemy (the plot of which would make a good thriller L&C fanfic and, now, that I think about it, I know I read one recently that was similar to that). Anyway, in it Julia's character catches her cute, drama teacher neighbor singing the Jet's fight song from West Side Story, while watering his lawn (I tried to find a clip of the scene, but failed). Something out-of-character like that would work.
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How about the theme song from the old Batman TV show? Or Mighty Mouse's theme song ("Here I come to save the day!")?
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Last edited by Lynn S. M.; 07/30/17 08:07 AM. Reason: Corrected theme song's character
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So cute! Though, the entire time, I kept thinking of that scene in ToGoM where the talent agent tells Lois that she could pass for Madonna. 
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