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Posted By: CarrieRene FDK: Caught In The Act 1/1 - 07/28/17 04:23 PM
Thank you ahead of time for the feedback on Caught In The Act, my short fanfiction of Lois getting caught doing something fun.

Posted By: VirginiaR Re: FDK: Caught In The Act 1/1 - 07/28/17 04:35 PM
Cute! We rarely get to see Lois let down her hair, so to speak, in this fashion. And to Madonna of all people! clap Hilarious!

I would've loved to see Lois's reaction to Clark's applause, though. Maybe there'll be a sequel of Lois trying to catch Clark doing something just as silly.
Posted By: Morgana Re: FDK: Caught In The Act 1/1 - 07/28/17 06:06 PM
The perfect summer fanfic! party I can see Lois belting out that sing with happy abandon. Glad Clark got to see his wife doing something so out of character!

Posted By: CarrieRene Re: FDK: Caught In The Act 1/1 - 07/28/17 06:45 PM
Originally Posted by VirginiaR
Cute! We rarely get to see Lois let down her hair, so to speak, in this fashion. And to Madonna of all people! clap Hilarious!

I would've loved to see Lois's reaction to Clark's applause, though. Maybe there'll be a sequel of Lois trying to catch Clark doing something just as silly.

Thank you. And that is a very good idea. Now we just have to think of a good song that would be perfectfor Clark.
Posted By: folc4evernaday Re: FDK: Caught In The Act 1/1 - 07/28/17 08:20 PM
hehe this turned out cute! I agree, Clark should be the next one to be caught doing something funny and out of character. Maybe Superman got caught dancing in the shower haha...
Posted By: CarrieRene Re: FDK: Caught In The Act 1/1 - 07/29/17 12:02 AM
Originally Posted by folc4evernaday
hehe this turned out cute! I agree, Clark should be the next one to be caught doing something funny and out of character. Maybe Superman got caught dancing in the shower haha...

I do like it turned out. Thank you once again for the help. Now we just have to find the perfect song. Any ideas?
Posted By: VirginiaR Re: FDK: Caught In The Act 1/1 - 07/29/17 06:01 PM
Originally Posted by CarrieRene
Now we just have to find the perfect song. Any ideas?
I don't know if you saw the Julia Roberts's film Sleeping with the Enemy (the plot of which would make a good thriller L&C fanfic and, now, that I think about it, I know I read one recently that was similar to that). Anyway, in it Julia's character catches her cute, drama teacher neighbor singing the Jet's fight song from West Side Story, while watering his lawn (I tried to find a clip of the scene, but failed). Something out-of-character like that would work.
Posted By: Lynn S. M. Re: FDK: Caught In The Act 1/1 - 07/29/17 06:42 PM
How about the theme song from the old Batman TV show? Or Mighty Mouse's theme song ("Here I come to save the day!")?

Joy,
Lynn
Posted By: VirginiaR Re: FDK: Caught In The Act 1/1 - 07/29/17 06:45 PM
Originally Posted by Lynn S. M.
How about the theme song from the old Batman TV show?
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Posted By: Queen of the Capes Re: FDK: Caught In The Act 1/1 - 08/01/17 11:57 AM
So cute! Though, the entire time, I kept thinking of that scene in ToGoM where the talent agent tells Lois that she could pass for Madonna. smile
Posted By: folc4evernaday Re: FDK: Caught In The Act 1/1 - 08/01/17 12:18 PM
Originally Posted by Queen of the Capes
So cute! Though, the entire time, I kept thinking of that scene in ToGoM where the talent agent tells Lois that she could pass for Madonna. smile

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