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FDK- Unmasked 12/25? #276091 06/29/17 08:49 PM
Joined: Oct 2013 Posts: 825 Toowoomba, Australia N NostalgiaKick OP Features Writer
OP NostalgiaKick Features Writer N Joined: Oct 2013 Posts: 825 Toowoomba, Australia	Feedback folder. Hopefully Clark is a little less frustrating in this chapter "It means never having to play it cool about how much you like something. It's basically a license to proudly emote on a somewhat childish level rather than behave like a supposed adult. Being a geek is extremely liberating."- Simon Pegg

Re: FDK- Unmasked 12/25? NostalgiaKick #276111 07/02/17 08:44 AM
Joined: Apr 2010 Posts: 3,660 Likes: 10 Somewhere on the East Coast Morgana Pulitzer
Morgana Pulitzer Joined: Apr 2010 Posts: 3,660 Likes: 10 Somewhere on the East Coast	Yes, Clark is not that frustrating, but Luther sure is! Hmmm, maybe I should take that back, Clark is careful with phones at the Daily Planet, but he meets Bill Henderson at the precinct? He should know Luther has eyes and ears there! He even mentions that Henderson is the only policeman he trusts. Why risk more reprisals from Luthor's 'shadows'? But more importantly the opening paragraphs where we see Martha and Jonathan holded up in some motel. How painful for them to watch their son suffer! My heart went out to both of them. Anyhow, this is one of the most powerful stories I have read in a long time. When Kerth time comes, you have my vote! Please post the next part as soon as you can!! Last edited by Morgana; 07/03/17 08:36 AM. Morgana A writer's job is to think of new plots and create characters who stay with you long after the final page has been read. If that mission is accomplished than we have done what we set out to do, which is to entertain and hopefully educate.

Re: FDK- Unmasked 12/25? NostalgiaKick #276120 07/03/17 08:34 AM
Joined: Jan 2009 Posts: 4,025 Birmingham, AL folc4evernaday Pulitzer
folc4evernaday Pulitzer Joined: Jan 2009 Posts: 4,025 Birmingham, AL	Okay so Clark isn't....AS frustrating as he was in the previous chapters....but LOIS IS! OMG! First off, Clark knows he's being watched every second by Luthor. WHY would he meet Henderson at the precinct? Why not meet somewhere else? Luthor's proposal? Oh, where do I begin? Same thing I said earlier: Noooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo!!!!!!! Okay, I'm ready for the next chapter whenever you feel like posting ~ Folc4evernaday Jodi Picoult - You might not write well every day, but you can always edit a bad page. You can't edit a blank page. https://loisclarktribute.com Subscribe on YouTube

Re: FDK- Unmasked 12/25? NostalgiaKick #276183 07/07/17 08:44 AM
Joined: Oct 2013 Posts: 825 Toowoomba, Australia N NostalgiaKick OP Features Writer
OP NostalgiaKick Features Writer N Joined: Oct 2013 Posts: 825 Toowoomba, Australia	Feedback from my loyal two Morgana- yeah, I don't like tormenting Martha and Jonathan, but unfortunately, that's the way it kinda has to be for this story Quote Anyhow, this is one of the most powerful stories I have read in a long time. When Kerth time comes, you have my vote! Why thank you! Folc- Quote Luthor's proposal? Oh, where do I begin? Same thing I said earlier: Noooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo!!!!!!! Wouldn't be a BaTP/HoL replacement without a creepy Luthor proposal Next chapter is going up now! "It means never having to play it cool about how much you like something. It's basically a license to proudly emote on a somewhat childish level rather than behave like a supposed adult. Being a geek is extremely liberating."- Simon Pegg

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