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Hopefully Clark is a little less frustrating in this chapter

Yes, Clark is not that frustrating, but Luther sure is! Hmmm, maybe I should take that back, Clark is careful with phones at the Daily Planet, but he meets Bill Henderson at the precinct? He should know Luther has eyes and ears there! He even mentions that Henderson is the only policeman he trusts. Why risk more reprisals from Luthor's 'shadows'?

But more importantly the opening paragraphs where we see Martha and Jonathan holded up in some motel. How painful for them to watch their son suffer! My heart went out to both of them.

Anyhow, this is one of the most powerful stories I have read in a long time. When Kerth time comes, you have my vote!

Please post the next part as soon as you can!!

Okay so Clark isn't....AS frustrating as he was in the previous chapters....but LOIS IS! OMG!

First off, Clark knows he's being watched every second by Luthor. WHY would he meet Henderson at the precinct? Why not meet somewhere else?

Luthor's proposal? Oh, where do I begin? Same thing I said earlier:
Noooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo!!!!!!!

Okay, I'm ready for the next chapter whenever you feel like posting

Feedback from my loyal two

Morgana- yeah, I don't like tormenting Martha and Jonathan, but unfortunately, that's the way it kinda has to be for this story Why thank you!

Folc- Wouldn't be a BaTP/HoL replacement without a creepy Luthor proposal

Next chapter is going up now!