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FDK: Beyond the External (5/?) by Lieta #270406 05/28/16 06:52 PM
Joined: Jun 2008 Posts: 527 Texas L Lieta OP Columnist
OP Lieta Columnist L Joined: Jun 2008 Posts: 527 Texas	I also had a lot of fun playing with the effects of the plot device of the episode =D But that will be in the next chapter. Sara "Lieta"

Re: FDK: Beyond the External (5/?) by Lieta Lieta #270412 05/28/16 09:59 PM
Joined: Apr 2010 Posts: 3,660 Likes: 10 Somewhere on the East Coast Morgana Pulitzer
Morgana Pulitzer Joined: Apr 2010 Posts: 3,660 Likes: 10 Somewhere on the East Coast	Keep going! This story is so worth it! Morgana A writer's job is to think of new plots and create characters who stay with you long after the final page has been read. If that mission is accomplished than we have done what we set out to do, which is to entertain and hopefully educate.

Re: FDK: Beyond the External (5/?) by Lieta Lieta #270415 05/29/16 12:23 PM
Joined: Jun 2006 Posts: 2,511 Likes: 29 Germany bakasi Pulitzer
bakasi Pulitzer Joined: Jun 2006 Posts: 2,511 Likes: 29 Germany	Okay, this is a really nice way of introducing PML. I'm wondering if Lois got sprayed. Clark's reaction seems to suggest that she was. Or maybe he was quick enough after all. It's never too dark to be cool.

Re: FDK: Beyond the External (5/?) by Lieta Lieta #270420 05/29/16 07:38 PM
Joined: Apr 2011 Posts: 9,509 USA VirginiaR Nobel Peace Prize Winner
VirginiaR Nobel Peace Prize Winner Joined: Apr 2011 Posts: 9,509 USA	I wonder what Lois's new development was. Will Lois and Clark make it to the library to work on their side project? Or will they be distracted? Did Clark stop Lois from inhaling the perfume? How far will a little Revenge go? Interesting developments with Lois working together with Clark (and possibly Superman) against LexCorp (and possibly Lex). Glad to see Lois finally coming to her senses. Curious to see where you'll take this. VirginiaR. "On the long road, take small steps." -- Jor-el, "The Foundling" --- "clearly there is a lack of understanding between those two... he speaks Lunkheadanian and she Stubbornanian" -- chelo.

Re: FDK: Beyond the External (5/?) by Lieta Lieta #270450 06/01/16 12:44 AM
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OP Lieta Columnist L Joined: Jun 2008 Posts: 527 Texas	Thanks Morgana =) I'm going to keep quiet on what Clark did or didn't accomplish, bakasi, but I did play with the episode quite a bit. I have to admit, Virginia, when I first started this I just thought MoSB seemed like a good place to have Clark get fed up with Lex and try to step up both his investigations and convincing Lois of Lex's true nature... I hadn't looked closely at what episodes directly followed it... but playing with PML was too good to pass up and an important even in the overall look at Lex's actions in season 1. Sara "Lieta"

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