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Posted By: Lieta FDK: Beyond the External (5/?) by Lieta - 05/28/16 10:52 PM
I also had a lot of fun playing with the effects of the plot device of the episode =D But that will be in the next chapter.
Posted By: Morgana Re: FDK: Beyond the External (5/?) by Lieta - 05/29/16 01:59 AM
Keep going! This story is so worth it! hyper
Posted By: bakasi Re: FDK: Beyond the External (5/?) by Lieta - 05/29/16 04:23 PM
Okay, this is a really nice way of introducing PML. I'm wondering if Lois got sprayed. Clark's reaction seems to suggest that she was. Or maybe he was quick enough after all.
I wonder what Lois's new development was. Will Lois and Clark make it to the library to work on their side project? Or will they be distracted? Did Clark stop Lois from inhaling the perfume? How far will a little Revenge go?

Interesting developments with Lois working together with Clark (and possibly Superman) against LexCorp (and possibly Lex). Glad to see Lois finally coming to her senses. Curious to see where you'll take this.
Posted By: Lieta Re: FDK: Beyond the External (5/?) by Lieta - 06/01/16 04:44 AM
Thanks Morgana =)

I'm going to keep quiet on what Clark did or didn't accomplish, bakasi, but I did play with the episode quite a bit.

I have to admit, Virginia, when I first started this I just thought MoSB seemed like a good place to have Clark get fed up with Lex and try to step up both his investigations and convincing Lois of Lex's true nature... I hadn't looked closely at what episodes directly followed it... but playing with PML was too good to pass up and an important even in the overall look at Lex's actions in season 1.
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