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FDK- Changing Perspectives 1/1 #269277 03/03/16 06:30 PM
Joined: Oct 2013 Posts: 825 Toowoomba, Australia N NostalgiaKick OP Features Writer
OP NostalgiaKick Features Writer N Joined: Oct 2013 Posts: 825 Toowoomba, Australia	Feedback folder. Every Thursday and Friday morning I have to get up before 6am (I am not a morning person) and drive my partner to work. It's a 45 minute round trip with dodgy radio reception, and some mornings my brain actually wakes up enough to get bored of the drive. This morning was one of those days, and this story is the result "It means never having to play it cool about how much you like something. It's basically a license to proudly emote on a somewhat childish level rather than behave like a supposed adult. Being a geek is extremely liberating."- Simon Pegg

Re: FDK- Changing Perspectives 1/1 NostalgiaKick #269278 03/03/16 06:34 PM
Joined: Apr 2011 Posts: 9,509 USA VirginiaR Nobel Peace Prize Winner
VirginiaR Nobel Peace Prize Winner Joined: Apr 2011 Posts: 9,509 USA	Sweet! I wondered if it was part of your on-going series, but I don't think you're to S4 yet. Also, now that I think about it, it's from Lois's POV and not Clark's. Been up since 5:45 this morning and my brain still isn't awake yet. Loved this intimate moment between Lois and Clark, even if most of it took place within Lois's mind. VirginiaR. "On the long road, take small steps." -- Jor-el, "The Foundling" --- "clearly there is a lack of understanding between those two... he speaks Lunkheadanian and she Stubbornanian" -- chelo.

Re: FDK- Changing Perspectives 1/1 NostalgiaKick #269279 03/03/16 08:27 PM
Joined: May 2011 Posts: 6,142 Likes: 2 Connecticut Deadly Chakram Nobel Peace Prize Winner
Deadly Chakram Nobel Peace Prize Winner Joined: May 2011 Posts: 6,142 Likes: 2 Connecticut	Loved the look at their relationship from Lois' point of view. It's always so interesting to see how her view of Clark evolves, whereas he is a "love at first sight" guy. Well done! (I also wasn't sure if this is part of your ongoing series teview.) Battle On, Deadly Chakram "Being with you is stronger than me alone." ~ Clark Kent "One little spark of inspiration is at the heart of all creation." ~ Figment the Dragon

Re: FDK- Changing Perspectives 1/1 NostalgiaKick #269280 03/03/16 10:05 PM
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OP NostalgiaKick Features Writer N Joined: Oct 2013 Posts: 825 Toowoomba, Australia	Originally Posted by VirginiaR I don't think you're to S4 yet. Nope... still stuck in S2. The Scardino episodes are giving me trouble. Originally Posted by VirginiaR Loved this intimate moment between Lois and Clark, even if most of it took place within Lois's mind. Thank you! Originally Posted by Deadly Chakram It's always so interesting to see how her view of Clark evolves, whereas he is a "love at first sight" guy. I have to agree with you there. Clark falling in love at first sight is sweet and romantic, but I love the build up of Lois's feelings. Thank you Oh, and I've added a note to the story making it clear that it's not part of my ongoing series. Thanks to both of you for making me realise it could be taken that way "It means never having to play it cool about how much you like something. It's basically a license to proudly emote on a somewhat childish level rather than behave like a supposed adult. Being a geek is extremely liberating."- Simon Pegg

Re: FDK- Changing Perspectives 1/1 NostalgiaKick #269346 03/08/16 02:30 PM
Joined: Sep 2013 Posts: 1,466 USA LMA Top Banana
LMA Top Banana Joined: Sep 2013 Posts: 1,466 USA	Awwww . What a great piece! Loved this! I fell so hard for their love story, as a teenager, when the show was first airing on ABC... Clark...falling immediately for Lois. Understanding her, seeing himself in her. Relating to her and sensing how amazing that connection was. Being right there, patiently, waiting for her to be ready. And Lois...scared, vulnerable, not trusting. Seeing Clark as only someone that can hurt her. S-l-o-w-l-y letting him into her life (without even realizing she's doing it). Working with him. Befriending him. Falling for him. Loving him. Finding--in each other, together--so much of what they were both lacking. It's so romantic! ... You really captured that journey. What made me fall for this show--and what has me 20-some years later still completey enamoured with it . GREAT!!! Laura Last edited by LMA; 03/08/16 11:19 PM. "Where's Clark?" "Right here." ...two simple sentences--with so much meaning. ~Lois and Clark in 'House of Luthor'~

Re: FDK- Changing Perspectives 1/1 NostalgiaKick #269468 03/21/16 08:40 PM
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OP NostalgiaKick Features Writer N Joined: Oct 2013 Posts: 825 Toowoomba, Australia	Belatedly (sorry, been studying)... Originally Posted by LMA What made me fall for this show--and what has me 20-some years later still completey enamoured with it Yup, it was that evolution of their relationship that really captured me as well. I'm a sucker for a good superhero show/movie anyway, but I loved the fact that it wasn't just a matter of 'hero shows up and instantly gets the girl' (though as I was a teenager, I'll admit that Dean's looks didn't hurt!) "It means never having to play it cool about how much you like something. It's basically a license to proudly emote on a somewhat childish level rather than behave like a supposed adult. Being a geek is extremely liberating."- Simon Pegg

Re: FDK- Changing Perspectives 1/1 NostalgiaKick #269470 03/22/16 03:18 PM
Joined: Sep 2013 Posts: 1,466 USA LMA Top Banana
LMA Top Banana Joined: Sep 2013 Posts: 1,466 USA	Didn't hurt in the least ... Laura "Where's Clark?" "Right here." ...two simple sentences--with so much meaning. ~Lois and Clark in 'House of Luthor'~

Re: FDK- Changing Perspectives 1/1 NostalgiaKick #274082 03/10/17 10:21 AM
Joined: Jan 2009 Posts: 4,025 Birmingham, AL folc4evernaday Pulitzer
folc4evernaday Pulitzer Joined: Jan 2009 Posts: 4,025 Birmingham, AL	Great synopsis of L&C's evolution of their relationship. Strangers > Rivals > Partners> Friends> Lovers ~ Folc4evernaday Jodi Picoult - You might not write well every day, but you can always edit a bad page. You can't edit a blank page. https://loisclarktribute.com Subscribe on YouTube

Re: FDK- Changing Perspectives 1/1 NostalgiaKick #274193 03/15/17 08:45 AM
Joined: Oct 2013 Posts: 825 Toowoomba, Australia N NostalgiaKick OP Features Writer
OP NostalgiaKick Features Writer N Joined: Oct 2013 Posts: 825 Toowoomba, Australia	Thanks, Folc! "It means never having to play it cool about how much you like something. It's basically a license to proudly emote on a somewhat childish level rather than behave like a supposed adult. Being a geek is extremely liberating."- Simon Pegg

Re: FDK- Changing Perspectives 1/1 NostalgiaKick #274195 03/15/17 02:52 PM
Joined: Apr 2010 Posts: 3,660 Likes: 10 Somewhere on the East Coast Morgana Pulitzer
Morgana Pulitzer Joined: Apr 2010 Posts: 3,660 Likes: 10 Somewhere on the East Coast	Ashamed to say I never commented on this story although, at the time of its posting I had fully intended on doing so. There have been many fics which have Lois and Clark declaring undying love for each other only weeks after meeting. In some instances it makes sense, but give me a story that builds their relationship up slowly, say over 200 pages or more. Clark was the one more open to a relationship - until Lois flatly told him she didn't have time for one and before a certain superhero came along to slow everything down. But here in a few paragraphs the evolution of their relationship comes together in a way we all can appreciate. Brava! Better late than never! Morgana A writer's job is to think of new plots and create characters who stay with you long after the final page has been read. If that mission is accomplished than we have done what we set out to do, which is to entertain and hopefully educate.

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