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FDK - The First Lady's Tale (1/?) #265174 08/02/15 06:04 PM
Joined: Jul 2014 Posts: 911 Likes: 2 East Coast USA cuidadora OP Features Writer
OP cuidadora Features Writer Joined: Jul 2014 Posts: 911 Likes: 2 East Coast USA	After watching Bolt From the Blue, I wanted to give Wandamae a happy ending. Comments go here. Thanks! Last edited by cuidadora; 08/02/15 08:58 PM. Reason: changing from complete to wip Cuidadora "Honey, we didn't care if you were a Russian or a Martian... You were ours... and we weren't giving you to anybody." ~ Martha in Strange Visitor "A love that risks nothing is worth nothing." ~ Jonathan in Big Girls Don't Fly

Re: FDK - The First Lady's Tale (1/1) cuidadora #265177 08/02/15 06:51 PM
Joined: Dec 2003 Posts: 2,082 Riverside, California groobie Kerth
groobie Kerth Joined: Dec 2003 Posts: 2,082 Riverside, California	Another tale! I love that people are still writing these! The title is great! I think this is so sweet - the idea that she'd want to find a way to thank Clark, even after time has gone by. And she absolutely caught him under the table - she definitely knows his secret! Loved it! You can find my stories as Groobie on the nfic archives and Susan Young on the gfic archives. In other words, you know me as Groobie.

Re: FDK - The First Lady's Tale (1/1) cuidadora #265185 08/02/15 07:42 PM
Joined: Apr 2013 Posts: 1,332 Tulsa, OK Mike M Top Banana
Mike M Top Banana Joined: Apr 2013 Posts: 1,332 Tulsa, OK	I love this tale! The only thing was at the end I thought there might be a part 2 with Clark receiving the package and letter and getting his view of the revelations of the "First Lady". I held out hope since your story post did not have a 1/1 on it but then I saw the FDK and nah... Excellent story nevertheless. Mike Create all the happiness you are able to create. Remove all the misery you are able to remove. Jeremy Bentham

Re: FDK - The First Lady's Tale (1/1) cuidadora #265187 08/02/15 08:22 PM
Joined: Jul 2014 Posts: 911 Likes: 2 East Coast USA cuidadora OP Features Writer
OP cuidadora Features Writer Joined: Jul 2014 Posts: 911 Likes: 2 East Coast USA	Thanks Groobie and Mike for the feedback. I'm delighted you liked this tale. Mike, I have a draft of Clark's reaction. I almost included it, but thought it didn't fit into the challenge. Does anyone else have an opinion on whether it should be part of this story? Cuidadora "Honey, we didn't care if you were a Russian or a Martian... You were ours... and we weren't giving you to anybody." ~ Martha in Strange Visitor "A love that risks nothing is worth nothing." ~ Jonathan in Big Girls Don't Fly

Re: FDK - The First Lady's Tale (1/1) cuidadora #265188 08/02/15 08:24 PM
Joined: May 2003 Posts: 492 MD, USA dcarson Beat Reporter
dcarson Beat Reporter Joined: May 2003 Posts: 492 MD, USA	I would enjoy a followup to this. Wonder how Lois will react to Wandamae being a successful romance writer while Lois's novel still sits on her hard drive. The Moon Society

Re: FDK - The First Lady's Tale (1/1) cuidadora #265191 08/02/15 08:47 PM
Joined: Apr 2010 Posts: 3,660 Likes: 10 Somewhere on the East Coast Morgana Pulitzer
Morgana Pulitzer Joined: Apr 2010 Posts: 3,660 Likes: 10 Somewhere on the East Coast	Are you kidding? Bring on the second part! In all my time reading FoLC I don't recall many stories with Wandamae! This was fresh and very funny! DCarson is right, Lois is going to have a cow when she finds out about the romance novel! Last edited by Morgana; 08/02/15 08:50 PM. Reason: Additional comment Morgana A writer's job is to think of new plots and create characters who stay with you long after the final page has been read. If that mission is accomplished than we have done what we set out to do, which is to entertain and hopefully educate.

Re: FDK - The First Lady's Tale (1/1) cuidadora #265193 08/02/15 08:56 PM
Joined: Jul 2014 Posts: 911 Likes: 2 East Coast USA cuidadora OP Features Writer
OP cuidadora Features Writer Joined: Jul 2014 Posts: 911 Likes: 2 East Coast USA	Okay, you convinced me. It's not complete. Changing it to WIP (probably 2 parts) with Clark and Lois's reactions. Thanks for your feedback. Cuidadora "Honey, we didn't care if you were a Russian or a Martian... You were ours... and we weren't giving you to anybody." ~ Martha in Strange Visitor "A love that risks nothing is worth nothing." ~ Jonathan in Big Girls Don't Fly

Re: FDK - The First Lady's Tale (1/1) cuidadora #265205 08/03/15 01:36 PM
Joined: Sep 2013 Posts: 1,466 USA LMA Top Banana
LMA Top Banana Joined: Sep 2013 Posts: 1,466 USA	Love that these tales are continuing to be written ... Great piece--and have to agree, it's a wonderful title, too. Raising my hand in agreement, and eagerly looking forward to more! Awesome Laura "Where's Clark?" "Right here." ...two simple sentences--with so much meaning. ~Lois and Clark in 'House of Luthor'~

Re: FDK - The First Lady's Tale (1/1) cuidadora #268382 01/04/16 03:15 PM
Joined: Apr 2007 Posts: 8,947 Likes: 28 Darth Michael Boards Chief Administrator Nobel Peace Prize Winner
Darth Michael Boards Chief Administrator Nobel Peace Prize Winner Joined: Apr 2007 Posts: 8,947 Likes: 28	Hi cuidadora! At first I wondered when Clark met FLOTUS. Of course, Mrs. Lincoln! Quote Wandamae carefully read the article. Why was Ultrawoman suddenly in Metropolis? And where was Superman? That’s going to be interesting, considering… Quote And why didn’t he rescue his friend Mr. Kent? Oh. I thought she had…? Quote Wait a minute! That picture of Mr. Kent looked a lot like General Grant! Quote And who would believe her anyway? She was obviously delusional at the time, and thought it was General Grant she saw. And yet, here he is in the paper, General Grant. Quote Her gaze drifted to the letter her lawyer had reviewed and the package on her desk. They were waiting for her to send a note of explanation. Huh? Quote The investigators discovered that some patients including me were receiving the wrong medications! Oops? LexCorp Lawyer: But we have had such wonderful results with our Blue-Zee-Boo brand of medications when vetting them against official brand products. Quote After finishing it she read it over and felt satisfied. She put it in an envelope, marked it “Personal” and “Read Me First”, then placed it in the package. She’d send it today. Nice idea! /off to part 2/ Michael Join us on the #loisclark Discord server! We talk about fanfic, our favorite show, life, and more! (It’s almost like the IRC days of old again!) I go by Michael on the Archives.

Re: FDK - The First Lady's Tale (1/1) Darth Michael #268388 01/04/16 09:00 PM
Joined: Jul 2014 Posts: 911 Likes: 2 East Coast USA cuidadora OP Features Writer
OP cuidadora Features Writer Joined: Jul 2014 Posts: 911 Likes: 2 East Coast USA	Quote Her gaze drifted to the letter her lawyer had reviewed and the package on her desk. They were waiting for her to send a note of explanation. Quote Huh? Oops, guess that wasn't clear. She has a package and needs to explain why she's sending it to Clark (explained in the letter). Quote LexCorp Lawyer: But we have had such wonderful results with our Blue-Zee-Boo brand of medications when vetting them against official brand products. Thanks for the feedback Michael! Cuidadora "Honey, we didn't care if you were a Russian or a Martian... You were ours... and we weren't giving you to anybody." ~ Martha in Strange Visitor "A love that risks nothing is worth nothing." ~ Jonathan in Big Girls Don't Fly

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