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Comments: Rider of the storm 5 #264778 07/12/15 11:51 PM
Joined: Jun 2003 Posts: 814 Texas ShayneT OP Features Writer
OP ShayneT Features Writer Joined: Jun 2003 Posts: 814 Texas	Sorry this took so long. I was away for July 4th holidays.

Re: Comments: Rider of the storm 5 ShayneT #264781 07/13/15 12:44 AM
Joined: Sep 2013 Posts: 1,466 USA LMA Top Banana
LMA Top Banana Joined: Sep 2013 Posts: 1,466 USA	Lovely . What a big chapter. So much happening. The atmosphere you created leading up to Lois getting attacked was just plain creepy! You had me for a nervous wreck while reading . I was hoping for a rescue from the Dark Rider...but to have King Midas show up in the same section, too, was definitely a treat . Really looking forward to an interaction between Lois and one/both of them . So excited for more! Laura Last edited by LMA; 07/13/15 12:45 AM. "Where's Clark?" "Right here." ...two simple sentences--with so much meaning. ~Lois and Clark in 'House of Luthor'~

Re: Comments: Rider of the storm 5 ShayneT #264782 07/13/15 01:28 AM
Joined: Apr 2011 Posts: 9,509 USA VirginiaR Nobel Peace Prize Winner
VirginiaR Nobel Peace Prize Winner Joined: Apr 2011 Posts: 9,509 USA	You're a terrible distraction to my writing, Shayne! I only glance over at the boards to see what's going on and see your name and suddenly my story is completely forgotten as I'm transported to eerie New Orleans. They say that the most dangerous place in Las Vegas is within one block from the strip. I'm sure that's true of the French Quarter as well. You really build up the suspense. Was Lois really shot or just injured in the attack? If she was shot, where? Yea to the man in black! Perhaps since the invention of the automobile, the black rider no longer uses horses. Maybe he never did. Wouldn't it be ironic if King Midas turned out to be Bruce Wayne? Sorry, I couldn't resist. My favorite section: Quote “How does this keep happening to you?” Lucy asked. Somehow she'd talked the nurse into letting her push Lois's wheelchair, which was clearly a mistake. Lois yanked her foot back as Lucy nearly slammed it into a wall. “You're blaming me for this?” Lois asked incredulously. “I'm starting to think you need more bodyguards than a rapper just to go get donuts.” “Lucy!” Lois said, glancing around quickly. She didn't know why these things kept happening to her. Just as importantly, she didn't know why these things never happened to Lucy. Lucy said things out loud that would have gotten Lois assaulted, and nothing ever happened. If she crossed the street without looking both ways, she'd somehow come out of it fine, while Lois would be in traction for weeks. If Lois were paranoid, she'd think that the universe was out to get her. Sometimes life just feels like it's after you without invitation, while all those trying to flag it down it blissfully passes by. VirginiaR. "On the long road, take small steps." -- Jor-el, "The Foundling" --- "clearly there is a lack of understanding between those two... he speaks Lunkheadanian and she Stubbornanian" -- chelo.

Re: Comments: Rider of the storm 5 ShayneT #264784 07/13/15 02:58 AM
Joined: Dec 2003 Posts: 2,082 Riverside, California groobie Kerth
groobie Kerth Joined: Dec 2003 Posts: 2,082 Riverside, California	Squeeee! He's there in the hospital! More! More! More! This story has me on the edge of my seat...I'm begging for the next part. You can find my stories as Groobie on the nfic archives and Susan Young on the gfic archives. In other words, you know me as Groobie.

Re: Comments: Rider of the storm 5 ShayneT #264803 07/13/15 08:21 PM
Joined: Apr 2010 Posts: 3,661 Likes: 10 Somewhere on the East Coast Morgana Pulitzer
Morgana Pulitzer Joined: Apr 2010 Posts: 3,661 Likes: 10 Somewhere on the East Coast	The tension of Lois being stalked by that kid had my palms sweating! Quote As Lucy turned another corner, Lois glanced back and she froze. King Midas was standing beside the nurse's desk, looking at a chart. So the plot thickens! Last edited by Morgana; 07/13/15 08:22 PM. Morgana A writer's job is to think of new plots and create characters who stay with you long after the final page has been read. If that mission is accomplished than we have done what we set out to do, which is to entertain and hopefully educate.

Re: Comments: Rider of the storm 5 ShayneT #264804 07/13/15 08:25 PM
Joined: Jul 2010 Posts: 3,883 Pensacola, Florida KenJ Pulitzer
KenJ Pulitzer Joined: Jul 2010 Posts: 3,883 Pensacola, Florida	I'm wondering if it is the king Midas referred to in her research or a person in a king Midas costume from a Mardi Gras parade. Herb replied, “My boy, I never say … impossible.” "Lois and Clarks" My stories can be found here kj

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