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Comments: rider of the Storm 4 #264451 06/28/15 05:35 PM
Joined: Jun 2003 Posts: 814 Texas ShayneT OP Features Writer
OP ShayneT Features Writer Joined: Jun 2003 Posts: 814 Texas	Well, what do you think? Last edited by ShayneT; 06/28/15 11:06 PM.

Re: Comments: rider of the Storm 3 ShayneT #264452 06/28/15 06:16 PM
Joined: Dec 2003 Posts: 2,082 Riverside, California groobie Kerth
groobie Kerth Joined: Dec 2003 Posts: 2,082 Riverside, California	Great job at describing the mood...I could feel Lois' excitement as she was discovering the information about the Dark Rider and making the connection to Clark Kent, and her uneasy feeling waiting for the streetcar. I'm really loving the story...I want more! You can find my stories as Groobie on the nfic archives and Susan Young on the gfic archives. In other words, you know me as Groobie.

Re: Comments: rider of the Storm 3 ShayneT #264453 06/28/15 06:24 PM
Joined: Jul 2004 Posts: 776 floor 13 S SJH Features Writer
SJH Features Writer S Joined: Jul 2004 Posts: 776 floor 13	Loving this! "I'm red-eyed, tired and drunk" Teri Hatcher "Fun will now commence" 7of9

Re: Comments: rider of the Storm 3 ShayneT #264456 06/28/15 07:26 PM
Joined: Apr 2013 Posts: 1,332 Tulsa, OK Mike M Top Banana
Mike M Top Banana Joined: Apr 2013 Posts: 1,332 Tulsa, OK	Just FYI. I called this 3a in the TOCs since you had already posted a 3... Mike Create all the happiness you are able to create. Remove all the misery you are able to remove. Jeremy Bentham

Re: Comments: rider of the Storm 3 Mike M #264464 06/28/15 11:06 PM
Joined: Jun 2003 Posts: 814 Texas ShayneT OP Features Writer
OP ShayneT Features Writer Joined: Jun 2003 Posts: 814 Texas	Thanks. I've changed this to part 4.

Re: Comments: rider of the Storm 3 ShayneT #264465 06/29/15 12:09 AM
Joined: Apr 2013 Posts: 1,332 Tulsa, OK Mike M Top Banana
Mike M Top Banana Joined: Apr 2013 Posts: 1,332 Tulsa, OK	I have updated the TOC. Thanks Mike Create all the happiness you are able to create. Remove all the misery you are able to remove. Jeremy Bentham

Re: Comments: rider of the Storm 3 ShayneT #264467 06/29/15 01:15 AM
Joined: Apr 2011 Posts: 9,509 USA VirginiaR Nobel Peace Prize Winner
VirginiaR Nobel Peace Prize Winner Joined: Apr 2011 Posts: 9,509 USA	How exciting to see how Lois's obsession started. She's hot on Clark Kent's trail. Is this a good thing? Will the Rider of the Storm be safe from Lois's investigation? Has Clark been alive all these years? Or has the mantle been passed down to the next generation? If it is the same man, will he recognize Lois as his soul mate? Will Lois be off to Kansas next to see what happened to the reclusive Kent family? Can't wait to find out! Originally Posted by ShayneT Thanks. I've changed this to part 4. Don't forget to update the FDK, too. LATER: Hmmmm. It seems as if you have changed the title but the responses still pop up as 3. Last edited by VirginiaR; 06/29/15 01:16 AM. Reason: Ooops. VirginiaR. "On the long road, take small steps." -- Jor-el, "The Foundling" --- "clearly there is a lack of understanding between those two... he speaks Lunkheadanian and she Stubbornanian" -- chelo.

Re: Comments: rider of the Storm 3 VirginiaR #264472 06/29/15 08:00 AM
Joined: Apr 2013 Posts: 1,332 Tulsa, OK Mike M Top Banana
Mike M Top Banana Joined: Apr 2013 Posts: 1,332 Tulsa, OK	He did update the initial posting but all FDK created replying to the original initial posting is marked 3. Unless everyone goes in and changes their FDK or a mod does it... Mike Create all the happiness you are able to create. Remove all the misery you are able to remove. Jeremy Bentham

Re: Comments: rider of the Storm 4 ShayneT #264503 07/01/15 12:09 PM
Joined: Sep 2013 Posts: 1,466 USA LMA Top Banana
LMA Top Banana Joined: Sep 2013 Posts: 1,466 USA	Completely loving this! There is such an intriguing feel to this story--it's so different, so mysterious. I'm really looking forward to Lois making some connections in her printed off research. And I'm also really looking forward to finding out if Lois makes it back to her room safely. Something just does not seem right . So excited for more! Laura "Where's Clark?" "Right here." ...two simple sentences--with so much meaning. ~Lois and Clark in 'House of Luthor'~

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