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Great start! I'm looking forward to more.


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If that wasn't trust, what was it? So, event though he lied to her every day since they've met, she still trusted him completely. If she had to be honest with herself, that didn't impact the trust she had in him because, deep down, she understood why he lied to her, why he had to protect his secret.

Why didn't Lois come to this conclusion during the series? I mean, all the facts were there she was just too distracted to figure it out.

This is a great start! Please continue. hyper


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Sounds like this is going to be fun. smile


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I love the start and the premise. This should be really good.

Thanks for posting.

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Thanks to all of you for the encouragements. Chapter 1 is ready and I hope you'll like it.


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