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I only recently noticed comments that people were still interested in this story. Here's a second chapter if anyone is still interested.

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hyper Thanks, Shayne for listening to our groveling. smile

Poor Lois. Nothing is worse than to be out of control. You had me scared when she lost sight of her sister. Gypsy fortune teller who disappears and promises he'll sweep Lois off her feet. Can't wait until they meet!


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Shayne,

I am intrigued with this story. Please continue! thumbsup

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Wow! clap notworthy clap

You have me completely hooked. Are you going to continue? Please, please continue grovel.

I love the mix between dream and reality. The switching back and forth. And the story has such a great, mysterious feel to it.

Will Lois meet the man IN her dreams? Dying to find out!

Excited,
Laura smile


"Where's Clark?" "Right here."

...two simple sentences--with so much meaning.

~Lois and Clark in 'House of Luthor'~
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What Laura said!


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Just a little begging was all it took? /Susan takes note for the future

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“Fine. But we aren't staying up all night, and we aren't getting hammered.”

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Lois was hammered.
Bwwaaa haaa haaa! rotflol I love when writers do this! clap

Great mood, great intrigue...I really hope you have plans to work on this story - it has great potential. thumbsup


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*sees there's a new chapter, dances happily, then goes back to reading*

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The woman wore a handkerchief on her head and numerous cheap rings on her fingers. She was portly and dark skilled, and she was laying out cards on the table.
Did you mean "dark skinned"?

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The woman looked at her with a jaded expression. Lois wondered how long it was before she tried to get more money out of them.

Before Lois could snatch her hand back, the woman grabbed her hand with a surprisingly strong grip.

She stiffened, and for a moment Lois thought she saw a genuine look of surprise in the other woman's eyes. The other woman quickly schooled her expression into something more neutral as she took Lois's other hand and stared at it for a long moment.
Methinks the woman recognized a true old soul connected to this city when she touched Lois.

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The woman leaned forward. “He's been waiting a long time for you, the man in your dreams. The time will be soon, but there will be great danger.”
Ooooo.


CLARK: No. I'm just worried I'm a jinx.
JONATHAN: A jinx?
CLARK: Yeah. Let's face it, ever since she's known me, Lois's been kidnapped, frozen, pushed off buildings, almost stabbed, poisoned, buried alive and who knows what else, and it's all because of me.
-"Contact" (You're not her jinx, you're her blessing.)
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Yes. Definitely interested in more. thumbsup thumbsup


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I love your style, Shayne. The characterizations are fantastic and I was pulled into the story immediately. I have such a soft spot for stories that touch on the soulmates theme. Please keep writing this one.



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