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FDK: Untitled, Part 2 by Kent28
#26248 12/03/05 08:29 PM
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Yay! Yet another engrossing chapter. And yes, I'm still very much digging your sense of humor.

Loved Lois' shifting thoughts and her faster than a speeding bullet exit from DP. Really liked the description of Clark's finetuning his senses to her heartbeat and respiration. And I can't wait to see the new and improved Lois and how poor, befuddled Clark will deal with that.

Looking forward to the next installment! hyper

Chris
"Superman is a guy who's seen wonders we'll never see and Lois is to him, one of those wonders."
Re: FDK: Untitled, Part 2 by Kent28
#26249 12/04/05 10:46 AM
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Hi,

Great piece. thumbsup

Maria D. Ferdez.
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Don't like Luthor, unfinished, untitled and crossover story, and people that promises and don't deliver. I'm getting choosy with age.
MAF
Re: FDK: Untitled, Part 2 by Kent28
#26250 12/04/05 11:00 AM
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Hey! Great job! I was a little leary of reading it first honestly b/c of the paragraph structure, but I took a dive in and found myself loving how you have the characters talking. It seems so real! I also love the premise. I really hope you post more as I have been printing it off and reading it when I have a spare moment.

I've converted to lurk-ism... hopefully only temporary.

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