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Yodel-ay-hee...Who?? (FDK: Because He Can Yodel) #26190 12/03/05 12:34 AM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 2,569 Third star to the right and st... HatMan OP Pulitzer
OP HatMan Pulitzer Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 2,569 Third star to the right and st...	I'm seriously behind in my reading (and trying to use what time I have for writing, since I'm even further behind in that), but when I saw the title, I just had to check it out. Great story, Chris!! What unique view of the ep! (Based on the challenge, I presume?) Love the opening paragraph (or, well, the second one, technically). "just as he knew that Elvis was alive and well and living incognito with a tribe in the Amazon basin..." So, welcome to the TOGOM writers' club! It's not very exclusive, but we're still glad to have you as a member! Just one thing... it feels like it needs a sequel. What happened when Perry found out Clark was alive? Paul When in doubt, think about penguins. It probably won't help, but at least it'll be fun.

Re: Yodel-ay-hee...Who?? (FDK: Because He Can Yodel) #26191 12/03/05 04:39 AM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 4,058 NY Laurach Pulitzer
Laurach Pulitzer Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 4,058 NY	Yeah how can you leave Lois and Perry like that! great job but a sequil would be nice. I'd like to see Perry get pissed at Clark. Laura Clark: “If we can be born in an instant, and die in an instant, why can’t we fall in love in an instant?” Caroline's "Stardust"

Re: Yodel-ay-hee...Who?? (FDK: Because He Can Yodel) #26192 12/03/05 08:55 AM
Joined: Nov 2003 Posts: 1,441 Likes: 1 Dublin, Ireland Ank. K. S. Top Banana
Ank. K. S. Top Banana Joined: Nov 2003 Posts: 1,441 Likes: 1 Dublin, Ireland	Wow! If she had to move heaven and Earth, perhaps come back to haunt Perry and explain the story after they'd killed her, she would do it. Waking a Miracle by Aria

Re: Yodel-ay-hee...Who?? (FDK: Because He Can Yodel) #26193 12/03/05 09:05 AM
Joined: Oct 2005 Posts: 378 The very Spanish part of the M... Capes Beat Reporter
Capes Beat Reporter Joined: Oct 2005 Posts: 378 The very Spanish part of the M...	Great story. Or more precisely, depressing story, but well done! I second Paul's request for a sequel. ~~ Swoosh --->

Re: Yodel-ay-hee...Who?? (FDK: Because He Can Yodel) #26194 12/03/05 02:15 PM
Joined: Jul 2003 Posts: 370 J Julia Beat Reporter
Julia Beat Reporter J Joined: Jul 2003 Posts: 370	Quote And, no matter how much Perry might wish otherwise, Clark wasn't going to walk, miraculously unscathed, into the newsroom. Yes, he is!! As you can see, this needs a sequel. Wonderful story! ~Julia

Re: Yodel-ay-hee...Who?? (FDK: Because He Can Yodel) #26195 12/03/05 03:16 PM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 3,846 Puerto Rico mariadferdez. Pulitzer
mariadferdez. Pulitzer Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 3,846 Puerto Rico	Hi, Interesting story. Maria D. Ferdez. --- Don't like Luthor, unfinished, untitled and crossover story, and people that promises and don't deliver. I'm getting choosy with age. MAF

Re: Yodel-ay-hee...Who?? (FDK: Because He Can Yodel) #26196 12/03/05 06:43 PM
Joined: Oct 2003 Posts: 1,363 Savannah, GA Sheila Top Banana
Sheila Top Banana Joined: Oct 2003 Posts: 1,363 Savannah, GA	This was just so sad. You've gotta follow up with what happened when Perry realized that he was right! I'm a firm believer in the fact that God doesn't put any more on us than we can bear. He does however make us come to Jesus every so often.

Re: Yodel-ay-hee...Who?? (FDK: Because He Can Yodel) #26197 12/04/05 07:22 AM
Joined: Oct 2005 Posts: 107 Canada luvin_my_LnC Hack from Nowheresville
luvin_my_LnC Hack from Nowheresville Joined: Oct 2005 Posts: 107 Canada	The question: is CK really gone? Maybe for the purposes of this story Clark is not Superman. I like leaving it up to the imagination. Not everything is predictable. Thanks, Judy

Re: Yodel-ay-hee...Who?? (FDK: Because He Can Yodel) #26198 12/04/05 01:07 PM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 484 The near side of the back of b... Krissie Beat Reporter
Krissie Beat Reporter Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 484 The near side of the back of b...	Just dropping in very quickly to thank you all for your kind words! I'm glad that people have enjoyed my little story... and I'm sorry for those I depressed. Paul: no this wasn't for a challenge. I didn't even realise there was one out there that this would fit. I won't say never to a sequel. In fact, LabRat has unwittingly given me a title I'm finding hard to ignore. However, I certainly wasn't planning on writing one. As far as I'm concerned, Clark will turn up as in the episode and Perry will realise that he was right all along. Chris

Re: Yodel-ay-hee...Who?? (FDK: Because He Can Yodel) #26199 12/04/05 03:59 PM
Joined: Mar 2004 Posts: 452 Colorado, US sheilah Beat Reporter
sheilah Beat Reporter Joined: Mar 2004 Posts: 452 Colorado, US	Quote As far as I'm concerned, Clark will turn up as in the episode and Perry will realise that he was right all along. Interesting, Chris. I thought the point was that the experience shook Perry's certainty in his belief, so when Clark shows up, Perry will actually believe the cover story because he can't imagine that Clark would have let Lois hurt that way if he could have prevented it. Sheila Harper Hopeless fan of a timeless love story http://www.sheilaharper.com/

Re: Yodel-ay-hee...Who?? (FDK: Because He Can Yodel) #26200 12/04/05 09:30 PM
Joined: Dec 2004 Posts: 451 Burbank, California Nicole S Beat Reporter
Nicole S Beat Reporter Joined: Dec 2004 Posts: 451 Burbank, California	Oh wow, this needs a sequel! I really loved this!! We need Perry's confidence back up, after Clark's miraculous return! Plus... how will he look at Clark knowing that Clark did allow Lois to hurt like that when he could have prevented it. Will he call him on it? What emotions will he go through?? You can't leave it there!! Anyway, this was a great story! Well written and just so nice! A great angle on this episode! ~NICOLE

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