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FDK: The Foundling - Matchmaker Style 5/10 #261400 02/17/15 11:24 AM
Joined: Jul 2010 Posts: 3,883 Pensacola, Florida KenJ OP Pulitzer
OP KenJ Pulitzer Joined: Jul 2010 Posts: 3,883 Pensacola, Florida	comments go here. For those joining the party late here are the links so that you can catch up: This series consists of the following: The Green Green Glow of Home – Matchmaker Style Pheromone My Lovely – Matchmaker Style Honeymoon In Metropolis – Matchmaker Style All Shook Up – Matchmaker Style Witness- Matchmaker Style Illusions of Grandeur – Matchmaker Style And Ides of Metropolis – Matchmaker Style Herb replied, “My boy, I never say … impossible.” "Lois and Clarks" My stories can be found here kj

Re: FDK: The Foundling - Matchmaker Style 5/10 KenJ #261406 02/17/15 02:35 PM
Joined: Apr 2010 Posts: 3,661 Likes: 10 Somewhere on the East Coast Morgana Pulitzer
Morgana Pulitzer Joined: Apr 2010 Posts: 3,661 Likes: 10 Somewhere on the East Coast	One of the reasons why I like this episode so much is because of the crisp writing and chemistry between all the characters. Below is a great example. Quote The possibility that their families might actually at some point intersect and she would be related to Jimmy caused a cold chill to run down her spine and a feeling of terror overtook Cat. She said, "If it does turn out we have any of the same genes, I'm having mine altered." Talk about hilarious! Quote "No, Louie. There's just evidence here that proves the kid was lying." "You want we should catch ‘im again and maybe, toss him around a little? Get the truth outta him." "No, Louie, I think we'll handle it Clark's way from this point on." So different (and better) than the original episode. But, Lois STILL needs to call Connie. Louie did them a solid favor. Morgana A writer's job is to think of new plots and create characters who stay with you long after the final page has been read. If that mission is accomplished than we have done what we set out to do, which is to entertain and hopefully educate.

Re: FDK: The Foundling - Matchmaker Style 5/10 KenJ #261408 02/17/15 08:36 PM
Joined: Jul 2004 Posts: 776 floor 13 S SJH Features Writer
SJH Features Writer S Joined: Jul 2004 Posts: 776 floor 13	Love Lois and Clark married. I agree with Morgana, the chemistry between all the characters is wonderfully handled in your work. "I'm red-eyed, tired and drunk" Teri Hatcher "Fun will now commence" 7of9

Re: FDK: The Foundling - Matchmaker Style 5/10 Morgana #261452 02/20/15 11:57 AM
Joined: Jul 2010 Posts: 3,883 Pensacola, Florida KenJ OP Pulitzer
OP KenJ Pulitzer Joined: Jul 2010 Posts: 3,883 Pensacola, Florida	Hi Morgana, Thanks for the FDK! Originally Posted by Morgana One of the reasons why I like this episode so much is because of the crisp writing and chemistry between all the characters. Below is a great example. Quote The possibility that their families might actually at some point intersect and she would be related to Jimmy caused a cold chill to run down her spine and a feeling of terror overtook Cat. She said, "If it does turn out we have any of the same genes, I'm having mine altered." Talk about hilarious! I've tried to maintain the integrity of the story. I do try to set the stage and apply context. Originally Posted by Morgana Quote "No, Louie. There's just evidence here that proves the kid was lying." "You want we should catch ‘im again and maybe, toss him around a little? Get the truth outta him." "No, Louie, I think we'll handle it Clark's way from this point on." So different (and better) than the original episode. But, Lois STILL needs to call Connie. Louie did them a solid favor. Since they are married there had to be a different motivation for her comments and it needed to be changed slightly. Herb replied, “My boy, I never say … impossible.” "Lois and Clarks" My stories can be found here kj

Re: FDK: The Foundling - Matchmaker Style 5/10 SJH #261453 02/20/15 12:30 PM
Joined: Jul 2010 Posts: 3,883 Pensacola, Florida KenJ OP Pulitzer
OP KenJ Pulitzer Joined: Jul 2010 Posts: 3,883 Pensacola, Florida	Hi SJH, Thanks for the FDK! Originally Posted by SJH Love Lois and Clark married. I agree with Morgana, the chemistry between all the characters is wonderfully handled in your work. Thanks so much for the compliment. I am starting with the script, but I am changing it more and more as time goes on. Most of the character interactions are being affected in one way or another. Herb replied, “My boy, I never say … impossible.” "Lois and Clarks" My stories can be found here kj

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