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Herb replied, “My boy, I never say … impossible.” "Lois and Clarks" My stories can be found herekj
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I love Lois and Louie's relationship and I really like how you expanded it to include the marriage and Louie's daughter not knowing about it.
The next few chapters will be different from the episode. I mean how can Lois have the conversation with Perry about Clark holding out on her when he is not doing that at all. That is a shame because that was one of my favorite scenes in the episode. (Lois: He's lying to me. Perry: Don't you lie to him? Lois: Of course, all the time but this is different!) But you will come up with something, I have confidence.
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In a horse voice, Luthor said, "Pay him." Luthor is definitely a horse's patoot.
"Oh, you can’t help that," said the Cat: "we’re all mad here. I’m mad. You’re mad."
"How do you know I’m mad?" said Alice.
"You must be," said the Cat, "or you wouldn’t have come here.”
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I loved the way you described, how the materials jack gave to the fence reached Nigel. Very little contact with actual people.
Nicely done.
Lois, call Constance, ASAP!
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Hi Mike, Thanks for the FDK! I love Lois and Louie's relationship and I really like how you expanded it to include the marriage and Louie's daughter not knowing about it.
The next few chapters will be different from the episode. I mean how can Lois have the conversation with Perry about Clark holding out on her when he is not doing that at all. That is a shame because that was one of my favorite scenes in the episode. (Lois: He's lying to me. Perry: Don't you lie to him? Lois: Of course, all the time but this is different!) But you will come up with something, I have confidence.
Mike Yeah, Louie didn't get much play in the series. We didn't even get his daughter's name. I thought it would be something nice to add.
Herb replied, “My boy, I never say … impossible.” "Lois and Clarks" My stories can be found herekj
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HI Anne, Thanks for the FDK! In a horse voice, Luthor said, "Pay him." Luthor is definitely a horse's patoot. Luthor is all for Luthor.
Herb replied, “My boy, I never say … impossible.” "Lois and Clarks" My stories can be found herekj
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Hi Morgana, Thanks for the FDK! I loved the way you described, how the materials jack gave to the fence reached Nigel. Very little contact with actual people.
Nicely done.
Lois, call Constance, ASAP! It was never elucidated in the series how Luthor was made aware of the globe's existence. With Luthor's mania for secrecy it had to be a convoluted process.
Herb replied, “My boy, I never say … impossible.” "Lois and Clarks" My stories can be found herekj
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