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FDK: Vision of Destiny 3/4 #259180 11/05/14 04:59 PM
Joined: Mar 2013 Posts: 1,020 England KatherineKent OP Top Banana
OP KatherineKent Top Banana Joined: Mar 2013 Posts: 1,020 England	You all know what I want. Comments and more comments, please. TOC KatherineKent/Victoria Lois: "You put up with me for the same reason I put up with you. It's because I'm completely in love with you." Clark: "And I love you ... Did we just make up?" Lois: "I think so."

Re: FDK: Vision of Destiny 3/4 KatherineKent #259182 11/05/14 05:24 PM
Joined: Apr 2011 Posts: 9,509 USA VirginiaR Nobel Peace Prize Winner
VirginiaR Nobel Peace Prize Winner Joined: Apr 2011 Posts: 9,509 USA	Yikes! What have you / Tempus done to Lois? Yes, I agree Lois... er... Lane should have known to keep her trap shut, but then she wouldn't be Lois Lane, now would she? She definitely, most certainly, shouldn't have spoken so much about what was... shall we say 'super'... about Clark. Did Lois travel through time, hanging onto the time-machine? Did she get dropped through time and landed who knows when in the future? Is she about to become psychic / go insane herself? So many possibilities... so much time to wait until the next part posts! Come back here! I want it now! You've got me on the edge of my seat. VirginiaR. "On the long road, take small steps." -- Jor-el, "The Foundling" --- "clearly there is a lack of understanding between those two... he speaks Lunkheadanian and she Stubbornanian" -- chelo.

Re: FDK: Vision of Destiny 3/4 KatherineKent #259189 11/06/14 07:31 AM
Joined: Apr 2010 Posts: 3,655 Likes: 10 Somewhere on the East Coast Morgana Pulitzer
Morgana Pulitzer Joined: Apr 2010 Posts: 3,655 Likes: 10 Somewhere on the East Coast	This conversation between Lois and uh, well ... Lois is sweet and hits the funny bone as well. Everyone will love the next installment! Morgana A writer's job is to think of new plots and create characters who stay with you long after the final page has been read. If that mission is accomplished than we have done what we set out to do, which is to entertain and hopefully educate.

Re: FDK: Vision of Destiny 3/4 KatherineKent #259190 11/06/14 08:53 AM
Joined: Jul 2010 Posts: 3,883 Pensacola, Florida KenJ Pulitzer
KenJ Pulitzer Joined: Jul 2010 Posts: 3,883 Pensacola, Florida	Yes, I agree with Morgana. The final part is the payoff and sets up the next part or segment of the overall story. Herb replied, “My boy, I never say … impossible.” "Lois and Clarks" My stories can be found here kj

Re: FDK: Vision of Destiny 3/4 KatherineKent #259191 11/06/14 02:32 PM
Joined: Sep 2013 Posts: 1,466 USA LMA Top Banana
LMA Top Banana Joined: Sep 2013 Posts: 1,466 USA	Aww--man! Don't stop there! What happened? Something is going on with Lois...Is she ok? Yeah, did she go through time? Please, KK, we need more! Another great part, Laura Oh--and really enjoyed reading about Lane's love for her husband. You did a great job of capturing just how important Clark is to her Last edited by LMA; 11/06/14 02:37 PM. "Where's Clark?" "Right here." ...two simple sentences--with so much meaning. ~Lois and Clark in 'House of Luthor'~

Re: FDK: Vision of Destiny 3/4 VirginiaR #259212 11/07/14 06:49 PM
Joined: Mar 2013 Posts: 1,020 England KatherineKent OP Top Banana
OP KatherineKent Top Banana Joined: Mar 2013 Posts: 1,020 England	Originally Posted by VirginiaR Yikes! What have you / Tempus done to Lois? Me, it was all me. I did it to Lois, not Tempus ... he's still tied up in the passenger seat. Quote Yes, I agree Lois... er... Lane should have known to keep her trap shut, but then she wouldn't be Lois Lane, now would she? Where would be the fun if she kept her trap shut? Quote She definitely, most certainly, shouldn't have spoken so much about what was... shall we say 'super'... about Clark. Well, she kept it pretty vague, really. Lois couldn't possible figure out what Lane meant from what she's said so far. In fact, Lois still doesn't believe Lane in any way shape or form. Good job there's part 4 ... and something - special - going to happen. Quote Did Lois travel through time, hanging onto the time-machine? Nope. Quote Did she get dropped through time and landed who knows when in the future? Nope. Quote Is she about to become psychic / go insane herself? Um ... ye ... Nope. Quote So many possibilities... so much time to wait until the next part posts! Um, tomorrow? Quote Come back here! I want it now! You've got me on the edge of my seat. Sorry. You'll get the rest soon. But it might not satisfy you... Originally Posted by Morgana This conversation between Lois and uh, well ... Lois is sweet and hits the funny bone as well. Everyone will love the next installment! I certainly hope so. Originally Posted by KenJ Yes, I agree with Morgana. The final part is the payoff and sets up the next part or segment of the overall story. Absolutely. It's all gonna come together/kick off/etc in the next part. And you will definitely be left wanting to know what happens after ... Originally Posted by LMA Aww--man! Don't stop there! What happened? Something is going on with Lois...Is she ok? Yes, she's fine. Quote Yeah, did she go through time? Nope. Quote Please, KK, we need more! Okay. Saturday good enough for you? Quote Another great part, Laura Oh--and really enjoyed reading about Lane's love for her husband. You did a great job of capturing just how important Clark is to her Thanks. Lois got a bit jealous of Lane's love for her hubby! Part 4 - the payoff - the 'thing' that sets off the rest of the stories ... coming soon. KatherineKent/Victoria Lois: "You put up with me for the same reason I put up with you. It's because I'm completely in love with you." Clark: "And I love you ... Did we just make up?" Lois: "I think so."

Re: FDK: Vision of Destiny 3/4 KatherineKent #259217 11/08/14 03:57 AM
Joined: Dec 2003 Posts: 2,082 Riverside, California groobie Kerth
groobie Kerth Joined: Dec 2003 Posts: 2,082 Riverside, California	I love that Lane called Clark her "everything"...ahhhh....WAFFY sigh... Certainly couldn't expect Lois not to investigate that alley, now could we? And then... Cliffhanger! Can't wait to see where this story ends and the set up for your next series of stories begins. You can find my stories as Groobie on the nfic archives and Susan Young on the gfic archives. In other words, you know me as Groobie.

Re: FDK: Vision of Destiny 3/4 groobie #259225 11/08/14 02:05 PM
Joined: Mar 2013 Posts: 1,020 England KatherineKent OP Top Banana
OP KatherineKent Top Banana Joined: Mar 2013 Posts: 1,020 England	Originally Posted by groobie I love that Lane called Clark her "everything"...ahhhh....WAFFY sigh... Quote Certainly couldn't expect Lois not to investigate that alley, now could we? Definitely not. She has the heart of a reporter, even if she isn't one yet. Quote And then... Cliffhanger! Can't wait to see where this story ends and the set up for your next series of stories begins. Well, see what you think ... I'm posting in a few minutes. KatherineKent/Victoria Lois: "You put up with me for the same reason I put up with you. It's because I'm completely in love with you." Clark: "And I love you ... Did we just make up?" Lois: "I think so."

Re: FDK: Vision of Destiny 3/4 KatherineKent #259374 11/15/14 11:12 PM
Joined: Feb 2008 Posts: 2,823 IolantheAlias Pulitzer
IolantheAlias Pulitzer Joined: Feb 2008 Posts: 2,823	If someone told me there was a time machine in the next alley over, I'd definitely go look. Who wouldn't? And how does Tempus keep on escaping? Just wondering.

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