You all know what I want. Comments and more comments, please.

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Yikes! What have you / Tempus done to Lois?

Yes, I agree Lois... er... Lane should have known to keep her trap shut, but then she wouldn't be Lois Lane, now would she? She definitely, most certainly, shouldn't have spoken so much about what was... shall we say 'super'... about Clark. Did Lois travel through time, hanging onto the time-machine? Did she get dropped through time and landed who knows when in the future? Is she about to become psychic / go insane herself? So many possibilities... so much time to wait until the next part posts! Come back here! I want it now! You've got me on the edge of my seat.

This conversation between Lois and uh, well ... Lois is sweet and hits the funny bone as well.

Everyone will love the next installment!

Yes, I agree with Morgana. The final part is the payoff and sets up the next part or segment of the overall story.

Aww--man! Don't stop there! What happened? Something is going on with Lois...Is she ok? Yeah, did she go through time?

Please, KK, we need more!

Another great part,
Laura

Oh--and really enjoyed reading about Lane's love for her husband. You did a great job of capturing just how important Clark is to her

Me, it was all me. I did it to Lois, not Tempus ... he's still tied up in the passenger seat.

Where would be the fun if she kept her trap shut?

Well, she kept it pretty vague, really. Lois couldn't possible figure out what Lane meant from what she's said so far. In fact, Lois still doesn't believe Lane in any way shape or form. Good job there's part 4 ... and something - special - going to happen.

Nope.

Nope.

Um ... ye ... Nope.

Um, tomorrow?

Sorry. You'll get the rest soon. But it might not satisfy you...

I certainly hope so.

Absolutely. It's all gonna come together/kick off/etc in the next part. And you will definitely be left wanting to know what happens after ...

Yes, she's fine.

Nope.

Okay. Saturday good enough for you?

Thanks. Lois got a bit jealous of Lane's love for her hubby!

Part 4 - the payoff - the 'thing' that sets off the rest of the stories ... coming soon.

I love that Lane called Clark her "everything"...ahhhh....WAFFY sigh... Certainly couldn't expect Lois not to investigate that alley, now could we? And then... Cliffhanger! Can't wait to see where this story ends and the set up for your next series of stories begins.

Definitely not. She has the heart of a reporter, even if she isn't one yet.

Well, see what you think ... I'm posting in a few minutes.

If someone told me there was a time machine in the next alley over, I'd definitely go look. Who wouldn't?

And how does Tempus keep on escaping? Just wondering.