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I forgot to post a feedback thread -- that's what I get for posting late at night!  I won't do a regular thread for every part, since I think there are likely to be fewer readers over here. So, at any point you want to leave feedback, please post here! Thanks for reading! 
Reach for the moon, for even if you fail, you'll still land among the stars... and who knows? Maybe you'll meet Superman along the way.
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Well, I enjoyed it greatly. The writing style drew me in fairly easily and most importantly of all, for this reader, the dialogue flowed well, wasn't stilted or made me wince. It all sounded perfectly authentic. In fact, I'd say not only should you continue, but you should see if you can't get it published once it's done. LabRat 
Athos: If you'd told us what you were doing, we might have been able to plan this properly.
Aramis: Yes, sorry.
Athos: No, no, by all means, let's keep things suicidal.
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Well, I enjoyed it greatly. The writing style drew me in fairly easily and most importantly of all, for this reader, the dialogue flowed well, wasn't stilted or made me wince. It all sounded perfectly authentic. In fact, I'd say not only should you continue, but you should see if you can't get it published once it's done. LabRat  Thanks, Labby!! Your post made my day!!  I'm off to post part two... Happy reading!
Reach for the moon, for even if you fail, you'll still land among the stars... and who knows? Maybe you'll meet Superman along the way.
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